1940's Noir Short Film "Love in Color"

Hey look! Valentines Day! I have a thing for that.

By TheAmazingSpiderWill - Feb 14, 2015 07:02 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Hey nerds!

Happy Valentines Day! If you're anything like me, you're at home being angsty because you're once again alone on this hallmark bullshit holiday (Don't take me too seriously, I won't hate it when I have a girlfriend next year) and you have absolutely nothing to do!

Well luckily, I have something here that I can waste 10 minutes of your time with!

Now, I know this isn't comicbook related but I've been posting short films on CBM for a few years and I love all the feedback I get from you guys. See, it's great because when I post these things on facebook all I get is family members and friends telling me how I'm doing such a good job and I'm so talented and blah blah blah, but when I show you lovely people you give me the harsh truths because you've no emotional attachment to me! Yay internet!

I really was aching to do a 1940's esque Film Noir type drama so I wrote, directed, and acted alongside a real life female (gasp!) in this thingy here! Watch!



I don't really love acting too much but for this short I had to try so I'd love some feedback from you guys in regards to that! 

Make sure to leave a comment with all your opinions and criticisms and stuff!

(Also, yes I know the opening credits are unnecessarily long, I like it, leave me alone.)

Hope you all have a good Valentines Day! Bye Nerds!
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NovaCorpsFan
NovaCorpsFan - 2/14/2015, 11:17 AM
That silver tongue line seemed kinda forced. Not in the acting or delivery, it just isn't how people talk. It worked in the context of her later bringing it up, but I got the feeling that's the only reason that line was in there, which kinda justified it.

Other than that, great work. One of the better short films I've seen.
MarkyMarkRises
MarkyMarkRises - 2/14/2015, 7:32 PM
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