FAN FIC: Superman for all Generations! Part 1

FAN FIC: Superman for all Generations! Part 1

Superman is in my opinion in need of a major reboot. So with that in mind I offer you my idea for a whole new Superman franchise. Starting with his Birthright!

By LastSon1027 - Feb 25, 2009 12:02 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

My idea for the new Superman franchise is a combination of things, the first part is completely taken from the comic books with a few tweaks. After the initial movie the writers could take the story anywhere they wanted, EXCEPT where Brian Singer took it! This article is about the first installment of a new Superman for all generations.

I'm a pretty busy guy so this synopsis came from Wikipedia so I'm giving credit where credit is do.

I feel that the first movie in this franchise should closely follow the source material. The best part with this is that there is no direct sequel to Birthright so any sequels will be open ended. I have made some changes to fit my idea of a perfect Superman movie. What follows is the synopsis for Superman: Birthright.

The story starts with the destruction of Krypton. Jor-El is preparing infant Kal-El's rocket and reflecting on all that Krypton has accomplished that will never be known to the rest of the universe. Kal-El's rocket fires into space moments before the planet's destruction. Jor-El and his wife Lara regret that they will never know if Kal-El survives.

Fast forward to present day West Africa, where an ethnic conflict between two fictional tribes. Clark Kent, a freelance reporter in his early twenties, arrives to cover the conflict, Basically this is where we will see Clark act very much the way he does on Smallville, But he learns things that put him on the path to learning more of his heritage.

Clark returns to Smallville, determined to learn more about his alien heritage. He tells his mother Martha that he wants to unearth his spaceship. He and Martha use the data tablet that came with Clark from Krypton to examine holographic records of Kryptonian history. Clark realizes the S insignia was his family crest on Krypton. He decides he will honor his ancestors and lost parents by donning this symbol as a hero. But he refuses to wear a mask while taking flight. Martha's solution is that only Clark's human half requires a disguise. She dresses him in professional, nerdy attire that stands apart from his usual look and gives him prescription glasses to wear. She promises they will refract light so no one will notice his startling blue eyes (which would otherwise give him away). Clark learns to slouch and act nervous and clumsy, to distance his civilian identity from tall, self-assertive Superman.

He travels to Metropolis to apply for a position at the Daily Planet. When he arrives, he finds robotic anti-terrorist helicopters crossing the sky. Upon reaching the Planet building, he sees the publisher, Perry White, berating Jimmy Olsen for fetching him the wrong type of coffee. Lois Lane appears and gives Perry the correct coffee to save Jimmy. When Perry storms off, Clark introduces himself to Lois and is immediately smitten with her. He finally meets Perry White for a one-on-one interview, but it does not go well. Moments later, a miniature robo-chopper hovering outside goes berserk and opens fire on the Daily Planet building. When no one is looking, Clark ducks out to change into his costume and flies off to repel the helicopters. When he rips a radio transmitter off one of the wrecked units, he uses his powers to trace the signal to the incomplete skyscraper in the distance: LuthorCorp.

Superman bursts into Lex Luthor's office, just as Luthor is speaking to someone via radio. He tells Luthor he saw the signals and knows he sabotaged the Army choppers. Luthor is amused that he thinks anyone could possibly convict him on such evidence and demands to know who designed the technology that allows him to fly. At that moment, LuthorCorp's armored security barges in, with Lois and Jimmy right behind them. When Lois asks what Lex's connection is to Metropolis' new hero, Lex pretends to endorse the caped figure, saying, "He is a friend to Lex Luthor."

The next day, the Daily Planet webpage dubs the hero "SUPERMAN." Luthor is ready with a cover story: a disgruntled Army employee was behind the attacks. LuthorCorp has stepped in to produce the robotic helicopters now that the Army's model has been recalled. But the LuthorCorp connection is an unprecedented black mark on Luthor's sterling reputation; Perry decides that Clark has earned his shot. Lois and Clark visit Luthor at the massive towers that form his corporate headquarters. Luthor greets them both, but when Clark extends his hand as if they are old acquaintances, Luthor coldly dismisses it, claiming to have never met him. He presses a button on the console in his desk and the room transforms into a holographic theater. Luthor asserts that he is first and foremost an astrobiologist, and describes many lucrative LuthorCorp inventions that were designed solely on his theories of possible space life. He then pulls up images of Superman and makes an official statement; Superman is not of this Earth. Clark reports Luthor's findings to Perry, who orders him write it up. Clark protests, knowing that the revelation that Superman is an alien will drive people away and points out that they have no real proof. Perry insists, saying Luthor is the leading authority on this matter, which is proof enough.

When Superman now goes out to rescue those in need, people are too fearful to even go near him.
While sulking in an empty restaurant, Clark hears a commotion as a suspension bridge across town inexplicably blows up. Superman speeds off to reconnect the bridge cables, but another explosion rocks the bridge. In his office, Lex Luthor watches the disaster and triggers bombs along the support column, making it appear that Superman is the one tearing it down. As the finishing touch, a mechanical drone in the water aims kryptonite radiation at Superman, causing him to collapse.

Realizing he has made an enemy in Lex Luthor, Clark looks back on his childhood in Smallville when a young Lex arrived in town. Lex was a quiet genius, but his intelligence alienated him from everyone around him. Lex's parents were unloving and ruthlessly trained him to become the next Einstein. Clark muses that "they were underestimating him". Despite his contemptuous exterior, Lex warmed to Clark when he discovered they shared a common interest: astronomy. Unfortunately, Lex was so "fundamentally disturbed" that he started spending increasing amounts of time locked in his makeshift laboratory next to the Luthor mansion. During one of these periods of seclusion, Clark visited Lex, who allowed Clark inside to unveil his new invention, a sub-space communicator. Lex hoped that with a piece of meteor rock (Kryptonite) from the meteor shower in which Clark arrived in, he would finally be able to open a wormhole into visions from an alien civilization. While aware of the radiation emanating from the rock, Lex assured Clark that it was perfectly harmless. Clark, stricken with sudden pain, staggered back looking ghastly; he was experiencing his first bout of Kryptonite poisoning. Lex misread Clark's expression and believed he had become afraid of him like everyone else. Dismissing him from the lab and commencing with his experiment, he managed to open a portal into events and times of the planet Krypton for a moment, but his generator overloaded and exploded, engulfing the house in flames. Lex, his hair burned off, staggered through the flames to uncover the piece of kryptonite that was integral to his machine. He neglected his father, who was buried beneath rubble and burning alive.

In the present day, Lex begins piecing together instruments to recreate his failed experiment from long ago in the bowels of the research facility, hoping to retrieve the alien visions he saw before. As expected, the Kryptonite creates a wormhole and Luthor is greeted with a wealth of visions from the history of Krypton.

The next day, the newspapers blare warnings of an upcoming alien invasion, showing photos of alien warships bearing Superman’s insignia. At the Daily Planet, Clark hears that the footage has been analyzed by experts and has been confirmed to be un-doctored and 100% legitimate. Having seen footage from the data tablet that was in his spacecraft, Clark knows Luthor must have used similar methods to uncover these images. Soon afterward, Metropolis is besieged by giant, monstrous-looking warships that bear Superman's logo on their face, including a giant mechanical spider. They begin killing indiscriminately. Troops empty out of the vehicles in Kryptonian garb, all bearing red capes and S-shields with their faces covered. Just as Superman is about to intervene, Luthor uses the spires of his skyscraper to project a city wide "web" of Kryptonite radiation from which Superman cannot hide. When the city police start firing on the vulnerable Superman, he assumes his Clark guise and meets up with Lois, who comments on how sick he looks. Upon returning to the newsroom, which is in chaos, Perry yells at Clark for coming to the office without a story on this crisis. Stripped of his powers and faced with imminent dismissal, Clark leaves a notice of resignation on his desk. When Lois catches him leaving, she calls him a "spineless worm" and then storms off.

The "alien commander", a man dressed in armor, calls himself "Van-gar" and declares war on Earth. Clark, his confidence restored by Lois' sermon, dons his costume and charges Van-gar's troops before they can open fire on a crowd of innocents. When Superman labels him and his men "actors", Van-gar beats down the weakened hero and whispers to him they're "not in it for the money". People believe Luthor is right and that Superman will turn on those weaker than him. Meanwhile, Lois sneaks back into the LuthorCorp building, which Luthor ordered abandoned. She sees Luthor giving orders to his men over his tele-screen and grabs his priceless shard of the Kryptonite with the "S" engraving out of its energy core, disabling the entire machine. However she fails to notice Luthor, who emerges from the shadows behind her. With the Kryptonite removed, most of the robots attacking Metropolis are revealed as holograms and vanish, along with the Kryptonite web over the city.

Back at LuthorCorp, Lex grabs the Kryptonite crystal from Lois' hands and demands she tell him how much she knows. When Lois tells him everyone will know about his hoax, Lex drags Lois to a wall, where he uses a remote control to open out to a balcony. He reveals that he placed a Kryptonite bomb inside the suit of every "Kryptonian" soldier and that they are primed to go off and take out Superman in the blast. However, his men don't know about the bombs, since Luthor "sort of left that part out of the hiring brief." He then shoves Lois off the skyscraper balcony. Superman is still down below and grappling with Van-gar, whose armor suddenly starts glowing green. Superman soars up with Van-gar in his grip, ripping the bomb off moments before it explodes. In the instant before Lois hits the ground, Superman rushes up and catches her just in time.

Superman returns to LuthorCorp, where Luthor is feverishly trying to reconnect with the static images to Krypton, this time to establish direct contact. Luthor begins requesting to be sent weapons before the machine overloads in his face, embedding several Kryptonite pellets in his face. Visions of the imminent destruction of Krypton swirl on the viewscreen; back on Krypton, many years in the past, one of the Kryptonians points to the sparring adversaries and says he can see them on his viewing screen, and he wonders if they are real. A desperate Luthor screams out "No! I am real!... We can save each other!" Jor-El and Lara appear seconds after they have launched baby Kal-El and say goodbye to one another. An awestruck Superman realizes that is his name: Kal-El. Luthor attacks Superman from behind, telling him he's doing him a favor, it's agony to be alone in the world. Superman tells Luthor he wasn’t always alone, he made his choice, and punches him several times across the jaw. A bloodied Luthor lays defeated as Superman runs up and calls out something into the void; but the transmission is cut off too soon, and Superman thinks his parents never heard what he was trying to tell them. In the aftermath, Luthor is scarred from the Kryptonite shrapnel that sprayed in his face, and is facing indictment. Clark Kent writes the article that ruins Luthor's reputation, although Luthor has already assembled his lawyers and will probably beat the charges. "Van-gar" was actually the leader of a group of extremist survivalists. Clark and Lois resolve their differences, with Lois revealing she intercepted Clark' resignation letter, knowing he wouldn't quit.

During the last moments of Krypton, Jor-El and Lara look at a viewing screen with a static image crackling from it. A figure, barely visible and wearing the S-shield on his chest, says, "Mother... Father... I made it." Realizing that their efforts were successful, Jor-El and Lara kiss as the building collapses around them.

So there you have it an awesome Superman Movie that features Lex as the Villain but still gives Superman more to fight then a rock! Now the question you have to ask is who will write this movie or who will direct it?

The answer to me is very simple. The best writer to adapt this script is the original writer. Mark Waid. He’s got the talent and he knows the material. As for director, my original choice was Peter Jackson because of his beautiful work on The Lord of the Rings. But after further thought it occurred to me that we need an action packed Superman movie. So my answer is to have an Awesome director who is sure to put the “Super” back into Superman movies. Michael Bay! At least then we know Superman will be punching someone. And there will be wonderful explosions and special effects. This concludes part 1 of my article in what will be a multi part article. Check back soon to see the cast for this awesome franchise. Let me know what you guys think.
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MidKnight35
MidKnight35 - 2/25/2009, 10:39 PM
The story idea is not bad. BUT I am a huge opponent of a Superman reboot. His origins are very well known even to the non-comic fan. He has fought Lex Luthor is 4 out of the 5 Superman movies. We really need to see Superman take on a new foe. There is so many Superman foes that can be used and see Supes really tear it up on screen. Doomsday, Braniac, Parasite, Darkseid. Darkseid would be the toughest to translate to film with the whole Apokolips thing. Doomsday would be awesome and would allow Superman to really unleash, much like the title they have chosen "Superman Unleashed".
iNsaneMilesy
iNsaneMilesy - 2/26/2009, 12:19 AM
As long as they DE-CAMPIFY the costume like with the Batman movie, I have no problem at all. I haven't liked Superman since the Max Fleisher Cartoons in the 40's (Best incarnation ever), and if it needs a reboot I say power him down. Im not interested in a guy that is more or less and indestructible swiss army knife that cowers at the site of a green rock.
LastSon1027
LastSon1027 - 2/26/2009, 5:23 AM
Well MidKnight35 just wait until my synopsis for the sequel it's gonna be all original and will feature a villain we have never seen on the big screen before.
Shaman
Shaman - 2/26/2009, 8:48 AM
I actually enjoyed your storyline. It's a good story to put on film but MidKnight35 has a point. Having Joker be the villain in all the 6 batman movies would've been ridiculous. So i can't wait for the new instalment of yours :)) Keep it up!
LastSon1027
LastSon1027 - 2/26/2009, 9:23 AM
Well I appreciate that Shaman especially coming from the Master Caster/Storywriter. If you liked it you should definitely pick up Birthright. It's got great art too. I hope you enjoy my casting pics too. :)
Shaman
Shaman - 2/26/2009, 10:14 AM
I'm sure i will Lastson, we've been on the same page most of the time :)
Tobuttica
Tobuttica - 2/27/2009, 1:21 PM
I don't think they would have to do a complete reboot. They could possibly do a 10 minute flashback, or origin in the credits, much like All Star Superman, or even how it was done in Friday the 13th. That movie, we all know who he is, what happened and that crap. They got through that in like the first 5 minutes. I'd say Final minutes of Krypton, Planet blows up, opening credits similar to Superman Returns, maybe something similar to the newspapers from Hellboy or Harry Potter giving quick story headlines about a "Superman" in Metropolis, some crap about Lex, then start the movie.
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