My Batman FanFilm

My Batman FanFilm

I want to know what you guys think of my batman fanfilm storyline.

By DonkeyPuncher - Jul 12, 2009 06:07 AM EST
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I’m making a batman fan film and I want to know what you guys think. I can’t decide whether to make an adaptation of Jeph Loeb’s Batman: Long Halloween, or to do the story I made up which is this one.

It’s not that long this is just an outline of what its going to be about.

Batman must solve the case of the nursery rhyme killer. Who kills his victims according to famous nursery rhymes. Batman also is has deal with Dick Grayson leaving as Robin (This is before he becomes Nightwing he’ll just be Dick in this movie, but there will be some flashbacks where he is Robin). Through out case he also has run ins with his villains (The Joker, Two Face, Riddler, etc). He works secretly on the case with Commissioner Gordon, because the new district attorney is blaming him for created the villains that haunt Gotham City (which makes him wanted by the Gotham PD). He also go’s through considering not being batman anymore.

So this is a short outline of basically all the aspects is my fan film. When I’m done with the script I will post it. So now I want to know what you think on how I can make it better, what to change, a title for the movie. I will give credit if I use your idea ( I will let you know whose ideas I used when I post the script so you can give me your names) in the movie’s credits. Or should I just forget this story and do an adaptation of Batman: Long Halloween.

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LEEE777
LEEE777 - 7/12/2009, 8:13 AM
I like it @ Donkeypuncher @!!! An it don't have to be long for a fan film! when you've done it you gonna put it on here dude? Good stuff! ; )
DonkeyPuncher
DonkeyPuncher - 7/12/2009, 8:15 AM
thanks man. yeah this will be the first place i'll put it on when im done
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 7/12/2009, 9:05 AM
Cool! ; )

Oh yeah apart from Joker etc, do we get any lesser known villains bits in this? Maybe even a DEATHSTROKE appearance maybe??
DonkeyPuncher
DonkeyPuncher - 7/12/2009, 11:00 AM
maybe i could put deathstroke LEEE777 i could would work in the story batman could look for deathstroke thinking he is the killer
Hellmont
Hellmont - 7/12/2009, 2:37 PM
Leave Robin out of the picture. Remember Robin is a publicity stunt by the publisher to bring in younger readers not to make Batman a better character. Besides the Dark Knight needs no sidekick.
Dont make it too cluttered........Less villans more character development...........Less is more......Quality over quantity.
superdog
superdog - 7/12/2009, 9:08 PM
Unless it's a transformers movie......actually I like it alot donkeypuncher. I always thought one of the things studios never do for batman is the dective aspect. He's the worlds greatest detective but they never have him detect anything. I think a story exploring his investigative skills would be great. He has all those investigative tools and gadgets and all the movies ever show are a batarang and grapler. Batman is the dark knight but he's also the worlds greatest detective so I would like to see you play up that angle:)
DonkeyPuncher
DonkeyPuncher - 7/12/2009, 11:56 PM
thanks superdog and im with you on how they should have him be more of a detective in the batman movies. all my favorite batman storys are the detective ones like Long Halloween and Dark Victory.
THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 7/13/2009, 12:58 PM
You could do something like my Batman End of Days story I posted. It was kind of an adaption of Long Halloween. It had lesser known villains: Zsasz, Killer Croc, and Calendar Man as the main foe, plus the mob.

It was a detective story where everyone belives the Calendar Killer to be Zsasz. While the mob tries to regain control of the underworld, the Calendar Killer is killing people acssosiated with the mob. Detective Julian Day is a profiler on the case that works with Gordon and Batman to catch the killer.

Take a look at the story if you wish.

http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/ChroniclesofMoeniaArcis/news/?a=6927

Let me know what you think

HAWK out.
DonkeyPuncher
DonkeyPuncher - 7/14/2009, 9:50 AM
Thanks HAWK i read your end of days story and it was really good. It actually help me with the direction that im going with in my story.
THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 7/14/2009, 11:14 AM
Cool man, I hope your fan film will come out good.
DonkeyPuncher
DonkeyPuncher - 7/14/2009, 11:28 AM
Thanks Hawk
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