JackyTimish Editorial Special: My Brilliant Idea For Star Wars 7 To Work

JackyTimish Editorial Special: My Brilliant Idea For Star Wars 7 To Work

My idea for Star Wars 7 and how it should happen..read on!

Editorial Opinion
By PsychoManiacJacky - Mar 27, 2013 10:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Star Wars



Hello Everyone,

It's time to sing praise cause Star Wars is coming back! I am also a huge Star Wars fan myself, I own the game to Episode 1 The Phantom Menace (I kinda liked the movie too), I also own Star Wars Battlefront 2, a few movies, and I guess a lightsaber. Any ways I am so excited J.J Abrams is directing the film we will get so much lens flares and so much lens flare action! People may make fun of lens flares but they do bring a certain quality in, that quality is of emotion and direct passion. I want this to be the best Star Wars movie of our decade! I have ideas that will work and hopefully J.J Abrams you are also reading this. So get ready to be amazed everybody! This time I am going to be serious.

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The Plot: An old villain from the past returns to haunt us once more...As we can all say Darth Maul has not been an iconic villain, only starring in the infamous Star Wars Episode 1, but what if he was to return along with a new villain. I don't think exploring another Star Wars universe is a good idea, so keep things more simple. Luke Skywalker has been in a deep depression. His life is going horrible. Luke knows one day a new evil may come, but he doesn't know if he can be the chosen one any more. In the middle of this all Darth Maul has awaken in cryogenic sleep in a mysterious facility on a distant planet known as Redemas. There we meet a new character, Dr.Killus and his organization known as Red Rising. The Red Rising are a group of genetically engineered immortal humans who have been working behind the scenes in all the Star Wars films. Dr.Killus their leader was once a member of The Darth Lords before they betrayed him. Dr.Killus invents a formula for immortality and has brought along a strong group of warriors and people willing to join his cause. He gathered Darth Maul and repaired his genetics after the events of The Phantom Menace restoring him completely making him completely healed. The Red Rising has even brought Darth Vader back! In the final moments before the Death Star was destroyed a group of their agents teleported to the exact moment and beamed Vader to their facility awaiting healing. They have even gathered many characters that have been rumoured to be long dead throughout the entire films, he plans to put them under his control to manipulate and infiltrate the entire empire. Dr.Killus plans are to soon take over the entire galaxy and rule with an iron fist!

The new villain organization The Red Rising can be compared to Cobra from G.I.Joe. The reason why is to keep a balance of making a steady story. We know the villains and their goals now it's time for the heroes to recover and step back into battle once again. You can draw comparison to Dr.Killus as Cobra Commander and The Red Skull. He had the menacing name and those traits that draw out pure evil.

Luke Skywalker in the movie is becoming extremely depressed. He feels so empty and alone. After witnessing his father is Darth Vader he wonders if he may turn into a villain too like him. He is the kind of character now who is extremely unstable and unpredictable. Luke Skywalker kills Princess Leila in the movie by accident after having an extreme mental breakdown. He runs far away but is caught up by Red Rising who manipulate his brain into believing he is now a Sith Lord. Han Solo has been greatly injured in battle and is being held in an Mental Institution to slowly recover.

There is a group of four Jedis who was being trained by Luke before he disappeared. There names are Romero Jebus, Iam Cuming, Misty Wang, and Kristen Vaen Doosh. They find out about his disappearance and set off to find him. They don't know soon enough that the galaxy will need to be saved. The faith of the universe is soon in their hands!

This will be a story that not only appeal to a new generation but will also cater the old hardcore fans.

I think even though in my idea Darth Vader will be alive, he should be saved for the 3rd film, but his return should be teased throughout.

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Jacky Timish's Star Wars Episode 7 Teaser Trailer:

The trailer stars with an old Luke Skywalker walking along a desert planet (He has dialogue were he discusses about the past battles and few events) Cue flashback sequences of his encounters with Darth Vader, The Death Star, Yoda, and we see Leila and Han Sola in these flashback sequences coming from the earlier films. We then see a dust of sand fly by and the old Luke Skywalker kneeling down. "I have made a greater mistake not a force of one can undo", spoken by the old Luke Skywalker as the screen slowly transitions to black. The music slowly rises up and we transition to lens flares! Then we see a slow moving over view shot of an unknown city in ruins. Then it fades to black. We cut to a shot of a wounded old Han Solo in a hospital and a hooded person standing over him. We see the mysterious hooded person draw a green lightsaber, "Your death shall not be in vein". Fade to black. Cut to a shot of a ship landing near old Luke Skywalker, "My life shall not be in vein". As the old Luke Skywalker looks at the distant ship landing. The old Luke Skywalker draws his lightsaber, the lightsaber is red! He proceeds to walk to the unknown ship landing. A man steps out the ship as old Luke Skywalker stops and looks in horror. "Son". The Camera shows a black cape, then transitions to back of Darth Vaders Helmet! Fade to Black. The camera slowly pans up into space CUE TITLE CARD "STAR WARS VII" Fade to Black. We hear Dr.Killus voice "All of what you know is about to be changed forever". It slowly transactions to Red Rising Logo and then CUE ENDING TITLE CARD 2015

Alternate Teaser:

Black Screen. Dr Killus, "All of what you know is about to changed forever". Cue lightsaber action sequence with Luke Skywalker and a Red Rising Solider. Fade to Black. Luke Skywalker, "I don't know if I can the chosen one anymore". Cue shots of the 4 Jedi's Luke is training. Fade to Black. Luke Skywalker, "One day an evil will come once again, and it might be me". Cue shot of Luke Skywalker standing on an edge of a cliff. Fade to Black. Dr.Killus, "Are you ready for this Luke Skywalker". Cue shot of Red Rising facility, we zoom into a room and see a cryogenic chamber. Zoom up from bottom of chamber and we see Darth Maul's face, his eyes suddenly open. Fade to Black. CUE TITLE CARD "STAR WARS VII" "2015"

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This may very well be the best Star Wars film ever if this happens.

I would cast Dwayne Johnson aka The Rock for the role as the immortal Dr. Killus. He said he wanted a role in Star Wars and he can also play a menacing villain! Ray Park should still be in the role as Darth Maul. I would also cast Channing Tatum as one of the main heroes in the story, Romero Jebus who is the leader of the new Jedi's that was being trained by Luke Skywalker. Channing Tatum does have leadership qualities as seen in the film G.I. Joe, I really think he can pull the role good as a Jedi.

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Alternate Plot Idea: Luke is sent to a galactic asylum for going insane and the rest of the film is him talking about his life with many flashback sequence from the previous films. That would be a very boring plot so lets stick to the first idea I had shall we.
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It would be the most action packed Star Wars film yet. Mind blowing explosions, deep mythology, and all the great stuff that makes Star Wars, what it is!

Sound off in the comments if my idea will work! Thank you for reading!
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TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 3/27/2013, 11:01 PM
Bold and Brilliant! I like the idea of the new Jedis, specially this Iam Cuming character, wanna hear more about him.

PsychoManiacJacky
PsychoManiacJacky - 3/27/2013, 11:05 PM
oh TheManFromMars your always around hahaha, thanks bud!
BlazinTexan
BlazinTexan - 3/27/2013, 11:12 PM
good but WORST NAMES EVER !!! There names were Romero Jebus, Iam Cuming, Misty Wang, and Kristen Vaen Doosh.
TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 3/27/2013, 11:14 PM
@Jacky

You're welcome! I'm always at service.

xcrementus
xcrementus - 3/28/2013, 2:24 AM
Remember when Jacky was banned? that was awesome.

Nowadays, not so awesome.
kong
kong - 3/28/2013, 2:44 AM
...wow...better...but...still sucks
TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 3/28/2013, 7:31 AM
@TankD/worldbreaker

No, I'm not Jacky. I just love his lunacy. Loved him ever since he first came to this site, a year ago, before I registered to this site.

You can click in my name and see that I do other things here than just comment on Jacky's articles.

I'm planning to write two Editorials too. (Don't worry they're will be "serious" Editorials). I just always appear on Jacky's articles because, what can I say, I'm a fan.

My real name is Michael, just in case you want to know...
TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 3/28/2013, 7:40 AM
@xcrementus

Jacky writes on the title that this is one of his Editorials.

You know that.

You hate him.

But you still click on it.

You either a masochist, a whining attention seeker, or an idiot.
PsychoManiacJacky
PsychoManiacJacky - 3/28/2013, 9:45 AM
YEAH THEMANFROMMARS! Shoot down em haters!

funny gifs
PsychoManiacJacky
PsychoManiacJacky - 3/28/2013, 9:46 AM
I think this calls for a random celebration...

funny gifs
dezdigi
dezdigi - 3/28/2013, 2:12 PM
@MFM,
I'm a masochist! That's why I read every article by Jacky!
Altair
Altair - 3/28/2013, 2:33 PM
Jacky this wasn't that bad. I'll admit that some plot elements are kind of retarded(I was injured so I went to a mental hospital instead of a regular hospital - Han Solo) but there are some cool elements to the story, like finally having a main villain that's not a Sith Lord.
TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 3/28/2013, 2:46 PM
@dezdigi



:P
Lhornbk
Lhornbk - 3/29/2013, 6:57 PM
I really, really, really tried to think of a nice way to critique this article, but as hard as I tried, it just wasn't possible. This is, quite frankly, the dumbest idea for a Star Wars movie that I've ever heard of or read about (except for your alternate plot idea; it's even dumber, which is an amazing accomplishment.) In fact, it's one of the dumbest ideas I've ever read for any movie ever. Actually, it's probably in the top 10 list of dumbest ideas ever, throughout history.

Red Rising. Really? An evil organzation based on Cobra from G.I. Joe (of course, considering that you're putting half the actors from the G.I. Joe films into it, I have the feeling that you have some sort of G.I. Jo fixation anyway). Really? You're just taking ideas from other movies and sticking them in. The bad guy "beams" in and "beams" out Darth Vader right before the Death Star blow up? Ummm, I hate to tell you this, but Star Wars doesn't have teleportation or "beaming"; you're thinking of Star Trek. Plus, Luke took Darth Vader's body with him on the shuttle and then burned it, and I think he would have noticed if it suddenly vanished. Genetically engineered immortal humans and a formula for immortality? Yeah, you're just taking more generic ideas for comic book/science fiction movies and sticking them in.

Quite frankly, I don't know if you were serious about this, or this was some kind of joke/satire or something. If you were serious....well, if you were serious, I don't even know what to say about you.
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