Manhunter Movie Script by Sting29j

Manhunter Movie Script by Sting29j

COULD THIS BE THE NEXT BLOCKBUSTER OR JUST ANOTHER FANS HOPELESS DREAM

By sting29j - Sep 04, 2013 04:09 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Source: sting29j of [email protected]

I will be the first to admit that I am nowhere near being a fairly good writer but not afraid to try. So I welcome honest criticism because it can inspire the greatest writers to become just that or in a weird way lead them to what they were truly meant to be. So here is my script, screenplay, or story whatever you want to call it. So read it all the way thru if you find it a interesting read or not but please give your honest opinion and not just some I can be a asshole statement lol. Maybe the right person will read it and maybe not but this is what I think can be a blockbuster if WB use the characters at there disposal. So enjoy or not.

MANHUNTER: The origin of J'on J'onzz
Written by: Joey Williams

We open with sounds of death as the entire martian race is being taken out by mad priest Ma' alefa'ak with a pyrokenetic plague called H'ronmeer's Curse which was spread by telepathy. Jon with haste as he sees his fellow martians bursting into flames flies back to his home only to see as he arrives his wife and daughter burst into flame. Jon used his telepathic powers to seek who was causing this and in doing so he finds out it was Ma'alefa'ak. Jon quickly learns how to block this plague from affecting him by putting up mental barriers in his mind to stay alive.

We fade to black as J'on walks out of his home and sees the death caused by Ma'alefa'ak then the title of the movie appears. As we come from black we are at the top of Olympus Mons mars highest mountain where Ma'alefa'ak and his followers reside. We hear Ma'alefa'ak talking to his followers in his throne room.

Ma'alfa'ak
My loyal followers this is a new beginning or the martian race. We are the most powerful race in the universe but under the rule of our elders we became weak and the rest of the universe knew that. How many lives were lost due to this weakness and eagerness for peace and hoping it would last forever. Nothing last forever except my rule with a iron fist over the universe molding it in my vision! First we will rebuild mars and soon begin our campaign to begin my reign.

As the camera shows the view from over Ma'alefa'ak shoulder we see to eyes from the darkness in the distance glow red and see Jon use Ma'alefa'ak own plague against him and his followers but as his legion of followers burst into flames Jon realized that Ma'alefa'ak was unaffected by his plague. J'on walks from the darkness to confront Ma'alefa'ak.

Ma'alefa'ak
J'onn I am impressed you have embraced death. I have always thought you were weak and a embarrassment to the martian race but those were the centements that were given to me dear brother. The one who doesn’t posses the ability of telepathic powers is the most powerful martian. Funny how things work out.

J'on J'onzz
Appreciating life and how precious it is doesn’t make you weak, it makes you stronger.

Ma'alefa'ak
Please! Don’t lie to yourself for the rest of your short existence. Fear equals power and with that power the universe will know that our kind is at the top of the food chain and I will show you I am the alpha male. So are you ready to join your wife and daughter in death?

J'on J'onzz
I will see my wife and daughter one day but today is not that day.

J'on and Ma'alefa'ak charge at one another to begin their battle. J'on opens with a combination of punches only to be countered by Ma'alefa'ak as he blocks J'on punches and hits him with a knee to the head. Ma'alefa'ak follows up as he picks o J'on and slams him to the ground. Ma'alefa'ak jumps in the air but J'on stretches his arm and grabs Ma'alefa'ak in the air and pulls him down to collide with knee. J'on makes his way to his feet and throws Ma'alefa'ak deep into the wall. J'on approaches the wall and as he gets close Ma'alefa'ak fly’s out and grabs J'on flies into the air and descends at a accelerated pace and slams J'on into the ground. Ma'alefa'ak as the dust clears stands over J'on who is laying there in pain. Ma'alefa'ak turns his right arm into a sharp knife like form and tries to stab J'on but he phases out and sinks into the ground and disappears as Ma'alefa'ak drives his arm into the ground and misses. J'onn rises up behind him and with both hand grabs his head and uses his telepathic powers to put Ma'alefa'ak in a coma induced state and then imprisons him deep in the mountain where he cant escape. Time passes by as J'on roams mars alone without purpose as he slowly drowns in depression as he remembers his dead wife and daughter as the visions of them dying feels worse each and every time he thinks about that day. The camera shows J'on break down to his knees as the widens its shot as it travels from mars to earth in Middle-town U.S.A observation lab. We see Dr. Saul Erdel saying good bye to his co-workers as he works endlessly into the night.

Observation lab(night)

Dr. Erdel
You laugh but I guarantee I am close to getting my life’s work up and going

Co-worker 1
Okay I believe you and when you get it working transport me to Daytona beach cause gas and air fare are too high

Others co-workers laugh at his sarcasm as they leave the lab. Hunter looks a little hurt but determined to prove them wrong as time passes by and when he was ready to call it quits he notices in his notes what he did wrong and makes the proper adjustments.

Dr Erdel
Okay this should do it and I will have the last laugh.

He activates his teleportation device and his beam travels to Mars and we see J'on on his knees grieving and teleports him to the observation lab where Erdel sees a silhouette in the light and is shocked to see J'on reveal himself. The doctor heart can take the shock of J'on and he collapses. J'on goes to console him and touches his head to read his mind as the doctor speak up in pain to J'on.

Dr. Erdel
I never expected in a thousand years to see a life form like you. Where do you come from?

J'on J'onzz
I am J'on J'onzz from Mars, the last of my kind.

Dr. Erdel
Mars

Those were Erdel last words as he dies in J'on arms. J'on carries the doctor to hide his body and then shape shifts into Dr. Erdel form and takes on the life of the doctor to learn the culture of earth and his surroundings. We see J'on at the doctors residence and sits down and watches TV endless hours. Two years pass on and J'on has met a lady friend under a new identity William Dyer and they are walking at night in Middle-town park enjoying themselves when a gang of thugs ambush them knocking his date to the ground. J'on fights back and is getting the better of the thugs until they hold a gun to his girlfriends head and demands he stand down. J'on stops the fight and reads the thugs mind with the gun and sees the thug has the attentions of killing his friend so he uses his martian ability to try to save her but he pulls the trigger and blows her brains out. In a fit of rage J'on pumbles the thugs and almost kills the thug who kills his girl but catches himself and it was in that moment he made the decision to protect the innocent and keep the innocent of his new home not to be destroyed like his martian brethren were eliminated.

3 years pass as Det. Jon Jonzz fights crime in Middle-town. During this time he has noticed that Inter gang has started to move into the city and the use of weapons that are out of this world.

Middle-town Pole Department

We see the daily activities of the police department as officers are busy as we the chief in his office talking to the mayor.

Mayor Davis
I know you have a lot on your plate but I promised my citizens safer streets and I’m for re-election catch my drift.

Chief Wayne Riley
With all do respect mayor I could care less about your political standings. I am more concerned the people and the men and women who put there life on the line to protect those votes you crave so much.

Mayor Davis
Riley crime is up 25% and climbing so please tell me why is that?

Chief Wayne Riley
That’s easy when your police department is under funded and the not to mention the criminals are better armed than you are.

Mayor Davis
Times are hard and you have to make due with what you got.

Chief Wayne Riley
Well mayor then you will make due as well until you are willing to do something about it.

Mayor Davis
What are you trying to say?

Chief Wayne Riley
You say times are hard but that’s not the case for everybody now is it?

Mayor Davis
I make ends meet just like everybody else and I suggest you put more attention on doing your job than worrying about things that don’t concern you.

Chief Wayne Riley
Okay mayor that’s not a problem I will but don’t let it become a concern of mine

Mayor Davis
Is that a threat Riley?

Chief Wayne Riley
No not at all Mayor just consider it good advise.

Mayor Davis
Watch yourself Riley.

Mayor Davis s stares down the chief as he walks out of his office. Chief Davis steps out his office and is startled as Jonn is standing right there.

MTPD(continued)

Chief Wayne Riley
Jesus Jonn! Come in my office.

Jonn
You OK chief/

chief Wayne Riley
I’m fine and will be doing better if you can tell me things are getting better on the streets.

Jonn
Well chief its a never ending fight and im not willing to give up, are you?

Chief Wayne Riley
I think you know the answer to that. As a matter of fact it seems you have the answer to everything around here.

Jonn reply’s with a little snicker

Jonn
As much as I wish that were true but its not.

Chief Wayne Riley is about to retort and is interrupted by the phone ringing. The chief picks up the phone and a look of concern comes across his face as he hangs up. Before the chief can say anything he gets interrupted by Jonn.


Jonn
Just tell me where I gotta go.

We fade to black and see a silluate of figure and hes talking to another figure.

Figure 1
I hope I don’t have to remind the price of failure.

Figure 2
No you don’t and if I may be so bold I think things are going better than even you have expected.

Figure 1
That's where you are wrong I expect you to fail and when you don’t just consider it another day you stay alive.

Figure 2
Understood and I promise you things are ahead of schedule and going smoothly.

Figure 1
Good and I hope that your personal vendetta doesn’t do anything hinder my plans.

Figure 2
No it wont I ensure you

Figure 1
Good for your sake Mr President

We see light from a open door as the President face is reveled as he walks out. We then see the president walk to the oval office where reporters are waiting for him to give a press conference. As the president walks in we see Amanda Waller standing to the side and hands papers to the President as he walks by.

The President gives a smirk as he gets the countdown to begin.

The President
My fellow Americans today I am pleased to inform you that we have captured two terrorist cells on our homeland through great in-tell and hard work by F.B.I.
And C.I.A including other branches of our government to stop these criminals from harming the innocent here at home or overseas. As I promised in my campaign to make sure that 9/11 will not happen here or abroad and I assure that those who threaten our way of life will met swift justice. As much progress that has been made I am sad to report the death of of our Secretary of Defense Matt Barker last night. We do not have much to go on at this time but as we get more information we will give it to you and I would like to give my condolences to his family and will help the best we can. Now I will take a few questions in a orderly matter at this time.

The President points to points to a reporter

Reporter 1
Would it be safe to say that the possibility of the secretary of defense death would be he was murdered fro knowing too much?

The President
The Secretary of Defenses job is to know everything he possibly can about those who threaten our way of life

Reporter 1
Thats true but during your presidency you two have clashed and have not been on the same page not to mention a investigation he spearheaded that centered around you.

The President
True and nothing was proven and I think you would agree when you have two people who are passionate when it comes to their job that they will not clash a time or two but I guess you never have clashed with your editor concerning you work.

Reporter 1
I have but my editor never questioned my loyalty to my country

The President interrupts in with a little anger in his voice.

The President
The day anybody questions my loyalty to this country is out of line but for someone like you to question my loyalty is a insult because I work hard to ensure that ten to twenty years down the line we will be the superpower that were meant to be and that every American can live everyday knowing they are safe and with that being said this press conference is over thank you for your time.

The president sits down as the secret service escorts reporters asking questions being led out of his office. Amanda Waller walks to the president desk and sits down shaking her head with a little smirk towards the president.

The President
Go ahead speak your mind Miss. Waller I know you have something to say.

Amanda Waller
Well it might be just me but I don’t think our Commander in chief should lose his cool to a small time reporter on live TV in front of the world.
Oval office(cont.)

Mr. President
Well im human I think im allowed to make a mistake or two.

Amanda Waller
Sometimes I wonder about that

Mr. President
Wonder about what?

Amanda Waller
You being human because since day I have been here you have showed no emotion. You have been a machine running this administration, it just a little shocking you let a reporter get under your skin considering what you have on your plate everyday.

Mr. President
Well trust me when I say it will never happen again but I wanna know how Cadmas is progressing.

Amanda Waller
Things are moving forward smoothly and Dr. Hamilton has made great strides in developing our own meta humans and the technology at our disposal is amazing and out of this world to say the least which makes me ask the question “How did we stumble upon this technology?”

Mr President: Just say we were at the right place at the right time but thats not important. Whats important is that we keep making progress just in case these meta humans and vigilantes threaten America.

Amanda Waller
Understood. So if you have nothing else for me I will get back to work.

Mr. President: That is all and keep me posted on any developments on the secretary death.

Amanda Waller: Yes sir

Amanda Waller walks out of the President office and the president picks up his cell and makes a call as we then the camera view flies from the oval office to the car of Jonn and his partner Det. Michelle Wilson as they are driving through town.

Jonn
Dont worry

Michelle
What are you talking about?

Jonn
The case don’t worry well get this one solved like the rest

Michelle
I think you mean you will solve this one like the rest

Jonn
You know better. We work well together and have solved a lot of cases together and this one will be no different

Michelle
OK, im glad you are confident because my gut tells me this is way above our pay rate not to mention the obvious fact that the answers come with a price I don’t think we can afford to play.
Market City (cont.)

Jonn
Do you want quit?

Michelle
I think you know the answer to that but Jonn the Sec. Of Def. Found dead in our town. I mean we have no clue why he was here and for what. Jonn do you ever feel like all our work is for nothing? Do you ever question why you do this day in and day out?

Jonn
To make a long story short no I don’t because the day I lost the one I truly loved I promised myself to protect and serve til my last breathe and never give up. No one will feel the pain that I felt years ago if I can help it. So if the Michelle I know is ready to focus on the task at hand then we can get the job done agreed.

Michelle with a grin replies

Michelle
Okay partner lets do this but answer one question for me

Before she asks the question a body comes flying into the windshield of the car causing Michelle to crash the car. Michelle is hurt and dazed. Jonn checks on his partner and looks up to see members of Inter gang fleeing in their SUV's and a few stay behind and pull out their guns and aim at Jonn and Michelle. They open fire as civilians scatter and traffic is in chaos Jonn uses his strength and knocks the door of the car off and shoots out of the car and through the building as the thugs weapons just shred the car apart. Jonn uses his x-ray vision to see where the thugs are and then touches Michelle’s head and with his telepathic powers puts her to sleep. The thugs approaches the building and slowly get closer to the hole Jonn put in but before they enter the building MCPD cars approach and the thugs light them up just destroying the cop cars and taking their lives then Jonn ascends from the ground behind the thugs and grabs two of them slams them together and throws them at two other thugs knocking them out the remaining thugs open fire and Jonn dodges their fire with his speed and disarms them one by one. The 5 remaining thugs in shock charge as Jonn and Jonn hits thug 1 in the belly then grabs thug 2 by his throat and slams thug 2 head into thug 1 head who is bent over in pain knocking those two out. Thug 3 throws a punch and Jonn side steps thug 3 and grabs his arm and with and with a palm thrust to the thugs arm breaks it and the thug 3 screams and Jonn says “shut up” as he backhands him knocking him out. Thug 4 grabs Jonn from behind as thug 5 punches Jonn in the face a couple of times then as he punches Jonn to the body Jonn uses his shape shifting powers to allow the thugs fist get stuck in his stomach. Thug 5 struggles to get free with a terrified look on his face as Jonn uses his strength and powers to wrap his arms around the thug 4 arms and constricts them to the point where thug 4 arms break and causes him to release Jonn. We then see citizens of Middletown taking cover and watching the fight from a distance. Thug 5 gets a elbow to the head and knocks him out and in a flash spins and knocks out thug 4 ending the fight. Jonn looks around at the damage that was caused then goes to check on his partner as he calls in medical assistant to come to the scene. Jonn as he checks on Michelle looks over to see that the victim who crashed into the windshield was the reporter who got under the president skin on TV as other officers and medics arrive we see from a over the shoulder view of a man standing on the roof top looking down on the chaos.
We switch to MTPD headquarters as we see Jonn looking at the evidence he has gathered from the both crime scenes as the chief walks up and sits down at his desk.


MTPD

Chief Riley
Dont worry Jonn Michelle is gonna pull through.

Jonn
I know but what worries me is not the high tech weaponry these thugs got there hands on because lets face it we are not alone anymore and the boy scout in Metropolis proves that but what is the Secretary of defense and a Washington Post reporter doing in Middle-town cause lets face you leave this town not visit.

Chief Riley
True but thats why I pay you the big bucks to find out

Jonn
Is that what you call my pay

chief Riley
Yeah what do you call it

Jonn:
Think about the size of my apartment and you will have your answer

chief replies with a smile

chief Riley
Well I say you are cheap. I mean damn Jonn lets face it it you are tighter than

A blast rips through the police headquarters right past the chief face catching him off guard
chief Riley
My butt cheeks right now

Thugs storm headquarters taking out cops left and right seeking revenge for Jonn beating up their comrades earlier.

Jonn
Get down chief!

Jonn takes cover as he sees the chief get shot up and reduced to ashes. Jonn peeks from around a desk and looks at one of the thugs in the eyes as Jonn eyes glows red then the thugs passes out and hits the ground as the thug beside him looks at him on the ground confused and scared. The other thugs really open it up as their laser blast fill the department with smoke and destruction then we see Kanto walk forward a give the high sign to stop firing

Kanto
Detective Jonn Jonzz I am Kanto and I need you to come out and save me the trouble from dirtying my suit with your blood

Jonn
Then we have a problem

Kantos
Fine death it is

Kanto gives the thugs the sign to open fire

In a flash Jonn sinks into the floor and disappears as the thugs blast on him then he pops up and grabs Kanto but Kanto uses his expert hand to hand combat skills to counter as he and Jonn exchange blows and counter each others moves while neither can gain an advantage. The other thugs converge on Jonn as Jonn kicks away Kanto to get some space and then hits one thug in the throat , another in the kneecap knocking him to the ground, and then gets kicked in the face by Kanto and as Jonn stumbles backwards Kanto spins towards Jonn whipping out a knife and stabs Jonn but surprising to Kanto Jonn alters his body density and the blade enters Jonn as if it was entering putty then he headbutts Kanto and gives him a swift kick to the gut and in a instant Jonn takes flight to escape and regroup. Kanto pulls out his cell and with a look of frustration makes a call.

Kanto
Its time




Fade to black then as a picture appears we see the backside of Amanda Waller walking down a hallway with Dr. Amil Hamilton with files in hand

Amanda Waller
Do we have the green doctor?

Hamilton
Yes everything is up and ready to go but I am concerned

Amanda
Go on

Hamilton
I have never dabbled with technology this advanced because as far as I was concerned it didn’t exist and I

Amanda cuts him off

Amanda
Doctor know this, its not your job to be concerned or ask questions that are obviously above your pay rate. Understood?

Hamilton
Yes mam

Amanda
Good cause if you fail doctor trust me when I say this. The unknown is gonna be the least of your worries I will see to that myself.

Hamilton with his head down gives Amanda a look of disgust as she walks away and then we see a underground facility with soldiers, scientist, and then we see a dozen white martians shape shift into men in suits. Amanda walks up to the white martians in disguise

Amanda
Your assignment is the capture of Detective Jonn Jonzz of Market City. Bring him in alive and I stress alive but if you have to rough him up a little then do so but I want him alive. Is that understood?

White Martian 1
Yes mam

Amanda
Now go

The martians disburse with haste and get into SUV's and leave the facility.



Amanda Waller walks over to a Kadmus agent

Amanda:
I need a team sent out to central City asap. All they need to know is right here
Amanda Waller hands the agent a flash drive

Agent1
Yes mam

Deathstroke walks up to Amanda

Deathstroke
You have something for me to do?

Amanda
Yes I do and I think you are the man for the job

Deathstroke
K who's the target?

Amanda hands him a case folder and Deathstroke opens it up to see who the target is

Amanda
So do I have the right man for the job?

Deathstroke drops the file and gives a little chuckle

Deathstroke
I wont even break a sweat

The camera zooms in to reveal that the target is Batman as the screen in mist form transforms into the night sky of Middletown as we Jonn in his true form eyes glowing red connecting to the thousands of minds in Middletown then we here the thoughts of Angela Chan about the story she is about to report. Jonn shifts into the form of a homeless man and swoops down in a flash to the display window of a electronic store as a breaking news report begins

Angela Chan
Hi im Angela Chan with a breaking news story of tragedy in Middletown We have been informed that members of Inter-Gang opened fire on MTPD where 15 officers were seriously wounded and 12 dead including chief Riley who has been symbol of hope in Middletown for years. Our prayers go out to the Riley family in this difficult time. Sec. Of defense Matt barker, Washington Post reporter Josh Barnes, and MTPD chief officer Matt Riley are the latest victims of Inter-gang we believe. We know that whats left of our local law enforcement trying to regroup and bring these criminals to justice and we are being told for citizens to stay in their homes for their own protection because these criminals are considered armed and extremely dangerous so do not approach them call law enforcement immediately There is a reward of a million dollars for any information that leads to capture of these thugs in Inter-Gang. We will keep you posted on this story as it develops im Angela Chan Middletown news.

Jonn takes a step back in disbelief as he walks into the alley and tries to connect telepathically with his partner Michelle and as he connects but the connection is broken seconds later. Concerned Jonn takes flight to Michelle apartment. As he approaches her door he see it is already open as he slowly walks in her apartment to see her laying dead in a pool of blood. Jonn starts to walk towards her sadden by her death then he stops as he hears a voice.

White Martian 1
Glad you could make Jonn. Its good to see you again after all these years

Jonn
Again?

White Martian 1
Yes again. Take a closer look, use your martian vision

Jonn eyes glow red and sees through the white martian disguise and looks shocked. Then in a instant white martian 2 punches jonn from behind which knocks him forward into another punch which knocks him backwards but as he falls backward Jonn shifts in a flash into the shape of a snake and wraps around Martian 2 and constricts rendering the martian unconscious and then the remaining martians bursts in the apartment from different directions and attack Jonn. Jonn releases hi hold on the wm2 and lunges at wm1 grabs and tosses him into wm 3&4 knocking them downs then wm5 hits Jonn with a combo of punches and kicks knocking Jonn through a wall. Jonn is picked up and as the wm5 throws a punch at Jonn he morphs to become solid like a rock and we hear the martian arm breaks and bends in a awkward way then Jonn with speed grabs the martian head and slams it into his knee as wm6 spears Jonn as they go bursting through the wall of the apartment and fall on the hood of a car as it is driving by. The other remaining martians follow them to the streets as chaos in sues with citizens running and traffic getting backed up. Jonn headbutts wm6 and slams his head into the hood of the car repeatably. Then Jonn get blasted with a energy bolt from wm7 gun sending Jonn sliding across the asphalt. Then wm 8&9 grab Jonn and pick him up and start to drag him to their SUV cause they think hes knocked out. As they are dragging Jonn, he turns transparent to escape their grip and goes underground as the martians look down and as soon as they do Jonn come bursting from underground grabbing both of them flying into the air and dropping them to the ground as Jonn flies away dodging energy blast from the remaining martians. We then see a split screen showing on one side Jonn flying over Middleton then on the other the back of Kanto standing on the roof aiming a gun to the sky then as Jonn flies by Kanto the screen goes back to a single shot as a blast from the gun is fired and Jonn goes crashing through the roof of a building. Kanto gives a evil grin.

Kanto
Damn im good

Fade to black then we here Kanto's voice as we see from first person view Jonn eyes blinking as he wakes up.

Kanto
Wake up Jonn we have many things to discuss

Jonn replies with pain in his voice

Jonn
What do you want from me

Kanto
I want you dead. So I can put your head on my wall but that cant happen as of now not to say it wont but somebody needs you alive just a little longer.

President
Jonn good to see again its been a long time

Jonn
What?

President
Dont worry in due time you will have some answers but right now I need you to do something for me and your country

Jonn tries to lunge at Kanto but do to the the electric headband he has on giving off a simectic discharge Jonn just falls to his knees. The president bends over and grabs Jonn by his chin.

President
Here is what you are gonna do. Since time is of the eccense we need you to take care of our light work and your unique martian powers will come in handy

Jonn looks shocked

Jonn
How do you know?

President
Well let that little mystery keep you up at night and no you cant read my mind so don’t waste your time but anyway all we need is for you to handle a small piece of business for us. There is a person of interest we need takened out.


Jonn
I wont do it

President laughs then in a fit of rage backhands Jonn and gets in his face

President
Well you listen to me you son of a bitch I waited too long for power and control like this and I refuse to let anybody stop me, least of all you.

Jonn looks at the President with anger in his eyes

President
You will do this or the so called innocent people you swore to protect and serve will suffer and you will have their blood on your hands. So its lose lose anyway you look at it. You don’t have a choice and if you try anything trust me when I say this (as the president gives Jonn a evil grin)the pain you felt when you lost Maria will pail in comparison to the pain he will put you through

Jonn with anger in his voice

Jonn
Whoever you are enjoy this moment because it will soon be your last

The President walks away laughing as we fade to black then a van door opens and Jonn is thrown out and Kanto gets out and tosses a cell phone to Jonn.

Kanto
Well you don’t need this headband anymore but don’t lose the phone because we will give you a call to let you know ahead of time where to be but for now enjoy some of the last moments of your life

Jonn
Trust me ill enjoy more than just that

Kanto
Yeah that sounds all well and good. Just do what you’re told

Jonn
I wont kill the innocent

Kanto
Whatever. All the information you need on the target is right here.

Kanto hands him a flash drive and gets back in the van and drive away.

View of Kanto driving the van.

Thug
Why don’t we just kill the bastard


Kanto
Death would be too easy at this point but if you make a man go against everything he stands for and kill him mentally to the point he offs himself then you have done something.

Thug 1
if you say so

Kanto still driving keeping his eyes on the road then pulls out a gun and shoots the thug.

There is a uncomfortable silence

Kanto
Anymore questions?

The remaining thugs say nothing.

Jonn gets to his feet and shifts into Det. Jonn Jonzz and looks at the flash drive and starts to walk out of the alley and as he walks out the alley he sees people looking at him with fear in their eyes pointing and walking to avoid him. One citizen grabs Jonn by the arm and its Jones old partner who retired years ago.

Rick
Where the hell have you been Jonn

Jonn
I don’t know myself Rick.

Rick
Whats going Jonn.

Jonn
I don’t know yet but I could use your help

Rick
Sure what do you need

Jonn shows him the flash drive
Jonn
Your computer


The scene shifts to the desert where we see workers with a huge drill drilling into the ground then shift Antarctica and finally at the north pole. We see workers drilling and slowly lowering a sphere deep into the earth. The scene shifts to Ricks apartment.


Rick
So I see that those bastards killed Riley

Jonn
Yeah but ill see to it that he didn’t die for nothing

Rick
So whats your next move Jonn?

Jonn
Finding her

Rick
I know her she is Diana Prince a female activist and a boutique owner. What the hell she do to you?

Jonn
Nothing but they want me to take her out

Rick
Jonn now I know you are not considering killing her

Jonn
No of course not but I do need to know why they fear her so much.

Rick
so what do you need me to do?

Jonn
I need you to be my third eye

Rick
Well its been awhile that I tested the old sniper skills but don’t worry I still got it

Jonn
One more thing

Rick
Anything

Jonn
Do you have a DR Pepper and some oreo's

Rick smiles

Rick
sure you got it buddy

We see Amanda Waller at her home office on her laptop when she gets a call on her special line.

Amanda
Yes mister President how can I help you?

President
Just answer me this and that is why hasn’t there been any further updates from project Cadmus. Is there a problem?

Amanda
No sir I assure everything is running smoothly. The reason I haven’t got back to you its just I have been so busy thats all.

President
Thats no excuse. I want to kept in the loop. I have a lot riding on this as well as you

Amanda
I understand sir but have I ever let you down before?

President
No I cant say that you have but there is a first time for everything and I hope your first time isn’t soon

Amanda
Not to worry Mr. President the advancement we have made with Nano technology has been amazing and thats why we are calling the first prototype Amazo and it is ready for a test run sir

President
Good, thats what I want to hear. Great work Amanda keep me posted

Amanda
Yes sir will do

Amanda ends that call and makes another. We see a split screen of Amanda Waller and Amil Hamilton

Amanda
Dr. Hamilton has Dr. Ivo finished the final touch ups on Amazo


Hamilton
Yes Miss Waller Amazo is ready for a test run

Amanda
Good and I have the perfect target

Hamilton
Who do you have in mind Batman, Superman?

Amanda
They will get theirs soon enough. Just know this two birds one stone Dr.

Hamilton
Understood Miss Waller


The scene shifts to outside Ricks apartment building as Jonn and Rick are getting in the car when the phone rings.

Kanto
K listen up Jolly green the target has a rally scheduled in Washington DC today at 3 so at 3:01 make sure that bitch is dead

Jonn
Dont worry Ill make sure of something today you can be sure of that
Rick
She has a rally scheduled for today at three but we should be there way before then

Kanto
Defiant to the very end I like that. Oh and by the know this no matter what you try in the end you die remember that.

Jonn
Who are you trying to convince me or yourself

Kanto
I cant wait til you are dead

The phone conversation ends
Jonn
K Rick do you think we can make it to Washington dc before 3

Rick
Sure

Jonn
Good thats where Diana is going to be

Rick
Are you considering to actually kill this woman

Jonn
What? NO

Rick
Okay so what are you gonna do

Jonn
get to her before they do because I don’t think she is what they are claiming her to be

Rick
K lets ride

Jonn and Rick get in the car and drive off then the scene switches to the highway

Rick
We are about 15 mins out with a lot of time to spare

Jonn
I cant thank you enough Rick
Rick
You never have to thank me Jonn I wouldn’t be enjoying retirement if it wasn’t for you

A nervous look comes across Jonn face

Jonn
How long would you say we have known each other

Rick
3 years tops why?

Jonn
Well I haven’t been completely honest with you for these three years

Rick
Jonn don’t worry I understand. I mean hell in this day and time its a common occurrence

Jonn
Really?

Rick
Yeah people come out the closet everyday in this country. So you being gay doesn’t bother me at all

Jonn
What! No no Rick im not gay im different

Rick
Different how? 3rd nipple, one ball? What?


Jonn shifts into his true form and Rick looks in shock and screams as he passes out at the wheel as Jonn grabs the wheel to get the car under control then the scene switches to a hospital room where Rick is being attended to. Rick wakes up and sees Jonn and jumps up in fear and tries to push his call button but Jonn grabs it and covers Ricks mouth with his hand.

Jonn
Rick please I need you to be quiet its me your pal Jonn the same one for the past three years. Im not here to hurt you okay

Rick calms down and looks at Jonn in disbelief and starts to calm down.

Rick
Just answer me this one question please?

Jonn
Anything

Rick
At anytime since we have known each other you have never probed me have you?

Jonn
No of course not I swear

Rick
Good and for future reference next time you decide to show somebody your green look don’t do it while they are driving k.

Jonn
Gotcha

Rick
Why am I in a hospital?

Jonn
You had a heart attack

Rick
Right. So whats our next move?

Jonn
My next move is to find Diana and you are gonna stay here and get well.

Rick
K well let me ask you. Whats your real name?

Jonn
My real name is Jonn Jonzz
Rick looks surprised

Rick
Who would have figured that to be a martian name

Jonn makes himself transparent and flies through the roof of the hospital and flies into Washington DC and as he floats over DC he seeks out Diana through his telepathy. We then see Diana in a hotel room when she stops in slight pain as visions of Jonn race through her head as she falls to her knees wondering what just happened. We see Jonn walking up to a door and knocks on it. The door opens

Jonn
Diana Prince?

A second after Jonn says that he gets punched in the face and crashes into the wall. Jonn makes it to his feet

Jonn
Wait you don’t understand


Diana charges him and throws a combo of punches and kicks as Jonn blocks them and then counters with a punch of his own that send Diana flying back into her room.

Jonn
Miss Prince I just wanna talk thats all

As Jon finished his sentence Diana did the spin and changed into her wonder woman getup and has a mean look in her eyes as she charges at Jonn

Jonn
Damn

Wonder Woman slides and takes Jonn down then jumps up and misses with a punch as she puts a hole in the floor. Jonn grabs her from behind as she counters with a punch to his groin then a kick to the face. Jonn staggers back and get hit with a left then a right that sends him to the ground. Wonder woman then picks him up and is getting ready to punch him but Jonn uses his shape shifting abilities to wrap his legs around her legs as Wonder Woman loses her grip of Jonns throat he flies up through the roof and then slams her down hard. Jonn takes a step back

Jonn
Diana I think there was a misunderstanding I

Before Jonn could finish his sentence Wonder Woman grabs her tiara and throws it at Jonn with great speed causing Jonn to stagger backwards. Jonn catches himself and looks at Wonder Woman as she has made it back to her feet as Jonn tried to grab her as he stretches his arms with speed trying to grab her but she dodges his attacks and then
Wonder Woman uses her lasso and it latches around Jonns neck as she slings Jonn and slams him down repeatedly but then Jonn phases out from the grip of her lasso flies up in the air to create distance between the two we see Wonder Woman smile and take flight herself after Jonn. Jonn looks back to see her chasing him so Jonn goes as fast as he can and Diana does the same then in a instant Jonn stop shifts his body to make as dense and hard as possible in the form of a wall as Diana crashes into head first which knocks her out and Jonn catches her as she was falling to the ground and then flies away. We see Jonn on the top of a building with Wonder Woman tied to it as she begins to wake up she realizes she tied up and breaks the rope instantly and just as she begins to charge at Jonn he yells at her

Jonn
Wait!

Wonder Woman stops

Jonn
I am not here to hurt you Princess Diana of Themyscira.

Wonder Woman
How do you know who I am


Jonn
Just say you are not the only one with gifts and if you don’t believe me I think your lasso will show im telling the truth

Wonder woman
Ok

Wonder Woman uses the lasso on Jonn

Wonder Woman
Who are you really?

Jonn
I am Jonn Jonzz of Mars, the sole survivor of a once proud race so I thought.

Wonder Woman
What are your intentions concerning me

Jonn
I was sent by corrupt men to kill you but I couldn’t because I believe you are not what they claim you to be.

Wonder Woman
Final question. What is your plan then?

Jonn
To take down this corrupt administration and whoever else that gets in my way

Wonder Woman takes the lasso off of Jonn.

Wonder Women
So how do you plan on doing that?

Jonn
I don’t know yet

Wonder Woman
Well whatever your plan is you are not alone

Jonn
Thats good to know.

The scene shifts to the sky as Wonder woman and Jonn are flying over the city when in a instant Jonn gets blasted out of the sky and goes slamming into the streets of Washington. Wonder Woman looks up to see Amazo. Amazo looks at Wonder Woman as his eyes glow blue scanning Wonder Woman head to toe. Bracelets appear on Amazo and in a flash Amazo flies towards Wonder Woman spearing her in the sky sending her through a building with great force. As Amazo descends down towards Wonder Woman Jonn hits him with punches to the head and body then grabs his head and knees him twice before tossing him through a building. Wonder Woman gathers herself and flies to Jonns side.

Wonder Woman
What was that?

Jonn
I don’t know but whatever it is its not done yet



Amazo rapidly shoots laser beams from its eyes as Wonder Woman blocks them with her bracelets as Jonn grabs Amazo from behind then Amazo head spins around to face Jonn then his eyes glow blue and in a instant Amazo goes transparent to escape the grip Jonn and then grabs jonn by his neck and legs and rips Jonn in half and tosses him aside as Wonder Woman charges in and Her and Amazo in the sky in a intense battle exchanging blows as the public looks up watching in amazement. We then see a pile of rubble with people around it as Jonn rises up in the form of the Martian Manhunter. People run in fear as Jonn joins the fight punching Amazo as he turn around to see the punch coming.

Jonn
It seems it can duplicate our powers somehow


Wonder Woman
Yeah it seem so but if it got our strengths then it has to have our weaknesses

Jonn
Try to keep him occupied

Wonder Woman
Gotcha

Jonn flies away as Amazo starts to follow him then Wonder Woman cuts him off sending him flying through the sky and then she grabs him with her lasso and tries to sling him but Amazo grabs the lasso and pulls her to him with force and punches her sending her whipping through the sky and as he flies in for another punch Wonder Woman counters with a kick to the head and follows up with a uppercut then a shot to the body and hits him with a double axe handle blow to his back sending him crashing to the ground. Amazo makes his way back to his feet and we see Wonder Woman and Amazo in a standoff as the camera view goes in a circle showing Amazo, Wonder Woman, citizens, and the surroundings. Woman Woman and Amazo charge at each other then in a instant Jonn grabs Wonder Woman and throws a large container at Amazo. Amazo shoots the container and in doing so it blows up and the gasoline that was in it falls on amazo slowly reducing him to a pool of goo as the goo soon evaporates as the fire goes out. Wonder Woman and Jonn descend to the ground and look around at the people that have gathered to watch the fight as they look in amazement and don’t know what to think of Jonn. A reporter slowly walks up to Jonn and Wonder Woman.

Reporter
Well mam and green guy do the people of earth have anything to fear from you?

Wonder Woman
I am Princess Diana from Themyscira and I assure that you have nothing to fear from me or my friend Jonn Jonzz of Mars.

Reporter
So its safe to say that there are more of you freaks out there?


Wonder Woman grabs him and lifts him off the ground as Jonn grabs her arm

Jonn
Hes not worth it. It will take time to overcome the ignorant

Wonder Woman pulls the reporter close

Wonder Woman
You are lucky little man because if I had my way I would give you a sex change the hard way

The reporter looks at her with fear in his eyes as we see that he peed on himself. Wonder Woman see that and looks at him with disgust and tosses him aside. We see the President looking at the TV in disgust as he turns off the TV we see glowing red eyes in the background that catches the President attention as he stops walking

President
There is no need to be concerned

Unknown
Im not. I just became aware of something that is very important. So what I need you to do is bring me the martian alive. Do what you will with the amazon but I need the martian alive

President
You know I cant do that. He took everything from me

The Unknown figure then in a instant flies across the room and grabs the president by the neck and slams him into the wall with great force. Secret service agents run in the room and prepare to open fire when the unknown figure raises his hand and blast the first agent turning him into ashes and the second agent we see him as the figure closes his hand to form a fist the agent crumples up like a piece of paper being balled up and thrown away and finally the third agent saw what happened to the second agent an runs away into a and a flash of light transports him back into the office as he runs into the death grip of the unknown figure who grabs him by the neck and we hear his neck break as the figure breaks his neck with ease and tosses him to the side

Unknown figure
This is the last time we have this talk. Bring me the martian, he is more valuable to me than you are and if you can do that I might let you live to see a universe created in my vision

The Unknown figure disappears and the president falls to the ground holding his neck as we see fear in his eyes. We then see Amanda Waller in a elevator and it opens and she power walks down the hallway and storms into the lab where Dr. Amil Hamilton is working.

Amanda
Tell me doctor what the hell happened

Dr Hamilton
Miss Waller with ability to copy there powers Amazo inherited there weaknesses thus giving them to tool to defeat him.

Amanda
Thats unacceptable Dr.

Hamilton
Im sorry but thats just the way it is

Amanda
What progress have we made with the boy scouts DNA.

Hamilton
I don’t have a answer for you on that

Amanda
Why not? After all the trouble we went through to get that DNA

Hamilton
Because once we gathered the DNA some unsavory characters took it with them and haven’t seen them since.

Amanda
What do you mean took it and haven’t brought it back?

President
Dont worry Amanda project Doomsday is being perfected as we speak and will be ready if needed

Amanda
K what else don’t I know

President
That its not wise to ask too many questions just do your job

Amanda
Ok so whats our next move?

President
Seeing that martian suffer and once the spheres are in place plan b can begin

Amanda
What spheres and what is plan B

President
You Amanda know that in times of war things might not go as planned so you adapt as the situation changes and thats what we are gonna do

Amanda
At what cost

President
Dont ask questions above your pay rate

Amanda
If thats the case then this is my resignation

President
Amanda thats not a wise decision

Amanda
Well it seems I started a pattern when I decided to work for you

President
Amanda you forgot your pink slip

The president pulls out a gun and fires as Amanda turns around striking her in the chest as she falls to the ground.

President
Now its time for me to claim what is mine

We see Jonn and Wonder Woman running on the roof of the Pentagon.

Wonder Woman
So whats our next move?

Jonn walks up to Wonder Woman and places his hands on his arms as Wonder Woman pushes him off

Wonder Woman
I like you but now is not the time to get fresh

Jonn
No that wasn’t my intentions trust me

Jonn places his hands on her arms

Jonn
Hope this works


Jonn closes his eyes and he goes transparent and a then Wonder Woman goes transparent and both descend through the Pentagon to the lower corridors of the building

Wonder Woman
Whats the plan?

Jonn
To create a distraction then we sneak up on the big fish

Jonn looks up at the using his x-ray vision as his eyes turn white


Jonn
I need you to use your strength to cause structural damage right here

Wonder Woman
And then what?

Jonn
We leave and pay the White House a visit

Wonder Woman
I trust you Jonn. I hope you know what you are doing

Wonder Woman punches the wall causing it to crack and then rips a hole in the wall ripping out the supporting beams as the upper floors begin to cave in as Wonder Woman and Jonn escape before the floors cave in. The pentagon personnel sends out a call for help to access the situation and figure out what happened. The president is approached by agents telling him to come with them to be safe due to the pentagon situation. The president agrees but before he goes he tells Hamilton to standby just in case we need Doomsday. We then see the White House as agents are on high alert but one by one Jonn and Wonder woman take out the agents in silence as they gain access to the White House. They are going down a hallway and then Kanto with a dozen of white martians stand in their way.

Kanto
So we meet again but unfortunately this will be our last meeting

Wonder Woman
enough small talk

Wonder Woman charges in as the white Martians attack. Wonder Woman jumps in the air and starts spinning and takes out three of the martians Four martians slither past her and attack Jonn as he grabs them and slams them into the walls over and over and at the same time kicks another in wonder woman direction as she punches it right in the top of its skull compressing its head into its shoulder blades as we hear the bones crunch. The remaining martians attack Jonn and Wonder Woman and get taken down with ease as Kanto watches on yawning at the carnage caused by Wonder Woman and Jonn. Then Kanto steps up and pulls a handle from his pocket and a blue blade shoots out.

Kanto
I hope you didn’t think it was going to be that easy?

Wonder Woman
Go ahead Jonn I got this one

Jonn descends through the floor as Kanto and Wonder Woman square off


Wonder Woman
Im unarmed

Kanto
your point

Wonder Wonder
Ok I see you have no honor or as man would say no balls

Kanto
Enough talk its time to add the death of the amazon princess to my list

Kanto walks towards Wonder Woman slowly then gives a evil grin as he strikes showing his skill with a sword. Wonder Woman blocks a lot of his attacks with her bracelets but didn’t count on him being so quick as he cuts her in two places on her arm.

Kanto
You know the Chinese in ancient times when they are engage in battle they would cut their opponent a thousand times but being careful not to cut a major artery so they could torture their opponent as long as possible but I think you will be happy to know I will make it quick.

Wonder Woman
Im not surprised. Finishing quick is something all men do

Kanto smiles and attacks as he strikes and Wonder Woman counters his attacks with his sword as Kanto then uses his sword to allow him to get in strikes using his hands and feet as he demonstrates his skill as hand to hand combatant. He gets in some kicks to Wonder woman face and then sweeps her legs from under her causes to hit the ground. Kanto laughs

Kanto
I thought all amazons were fierce warriors. Some of the best but you have shown me nothing.

Wonder Woman gathers herself and says Hera give me strength and nip up to her feet

Wonder Woman
Be careful what you ask for little man

Kanto with speed pulls a gun and fires numerous shots as Wonder Woman blocks them and get closer to Kanto. The gun runs out of ammo and he attacks with his sword but starts to realize Wonder Woman has figured him out then he slashes in a downward motion but wonder woman side steps him and as his sword hits the floor she steps on it breaking the blade. Wonder woman grabs his arm as he throws a punch and grabs his other arm as Kanto looks at her and spits in her face. Rage comes over her face as
Wonder woman bends both of his arms from the elbow down backwards as we hear the break and kanto screams in pain but not for long as she tells him to shut up before giving him a headbutt that knocks him out. The scene then shifts to the underground safe house of the president. We see Jonn walk through the door as the agents open fire but the bullets go right through Jonn cause he is transparent and as he knocks out the agents before he confronts the president.

President
Jonn you amaze me but in that amazement still lies a hatred for you that will never die.

Jonn
What have I done to cause you to hate me?

President
First let me press this to start the creation of a new world and second let give you a brief history lesson. You stopped me from taking my rightful place in the annals of martian history as being the one who took our race to greater heights than any of us could have imagined. So with that said you don’t have to hide yourself from me dear brother I know your true face as you now know mine.

Jonn looks in shock as he sees the president transforms into his brother Ma 'alfa 'ak

Jonn
Brother just know I still love you. The past is the past. Lets start over a clean slate

Ma'alfa'ak
Save your breathe Jonn. This is my destiny. To kill you and take my rightful place in history for our race.

Jonn
Sorry you feel that way but you wont make history on this day but become it



Ma'alfa'ak charges at Jonn as he strikes Jonn to the body before connecting with a shot to the temple and he doesn’t let up as he continues to pound Jonn to his knees but Jonn then counters with a powerful palm strike to Ma'alfa'ak to his knee causing him to fall and as soon as Ma'alfa'ak hits the ground Jonn punches him in the back of his head putting a hole in the floor. Jonn picks him up but Ma'alf'ak quickly transforms his arms into huge hammers slamming them into both sides of Jonns body then kicks Jonn into the wall and doesn’t let up as he charges Jonn and his arm turns into a blade as he stabs Jonn but Jonn shape shifts his body allowing the blade to go through as the core of his body turns into arms holding Ma'alf'ak arm as Jonn shifts into his regular form kicks Ma'alfa'ak in the leg numerous times then picks him up and slams him to the ground. Jonn looks at a screen that is showing a countdown and in that instant where he takes his eyes off Ma'alfa'ak gets taken down as Jonn gets pumbled by his brother to the point he draws black blood from Jonn. Ma'alfa'ak
stands over Jonn.


Ma'alfa'ak
Jonn its going to be a beautiful new world. Sorry you wont be here to see it but I will get what I want and he will get what he wants

Jonn
Whoever you serve will never give you the power you think you deserve

Ma'alfa'ak
Thats where you are wrong. You are wrong.

Then in a instant Jonn descends into the ground as Ma'alfa'ak looks around trying to catch Jonn as he reappears but Jonn makes him wait as Ma'alfa'ak get frustrated and yells out to Jonn

Ma'alfa'ak
Show yourself!

In that moment Jonn pulls him down into the ground and then there is silence for a few moments. Ma'alfa'ak shoots out of that hole in the ground and as he hits the ceiling Jonns arm comes from the hole in the shape of a door crushing him as Jonn and then stops as Ma'alfa'ak falls to the floor. Jonn rises from the hole and looks down at his brother sadden that it has come to this and Jonn kneels down to read his brothers mind a few seconds later he opens his eyes in shock of what he saw. Ma'alfa'ak awakens and stabs Jonn in his stomach as he rises

Ma'alfa'ak
Now you know everything. Now except it


Jonn then in a flash reaches inside Ma'alfa'aks body as we can see him grab his spine and hear it break as ma'alfa'ak falls to ground. As Jonn walks to the computer and stops the countdown we see agents storm the room and see The president for who he really was and look confused as Jonn picks up his brother and walks away with him as the agents let him go with disbelief in their eyes as we see Wonder Woman show up to see Jonn carrying his brother as we see the view from back of Jonn and Wonder Woman walking away. The scene shifts to a reporter in front of the White House.

Reporter
Six months have passed since the death of our former president Richard Jackson who turned out to be a alien and with the upcoming election we are finally sure of something in these times of uncertainty and that is Lex Luthor will be our next President as he is ahead in the polls but many people are wondering how can he run Lex Corp and the country at the same time and here is what he had to say.

Lex Luthor
The people shouldn’t worry. I have people in place to run the day to day operations so I can focus on making this country once again the super power it was meant to be.

Reporter
Then he was asked about the meta humans and vigilantes that live among us

Lex Luthor
I have no problem with these meta humans living among because diversity is what makes this country great but I will say this if these meta humans pose a severe threat to our national security they will be dealt with extreme force because know one is above the law.

Reporter
Its obvious Lex Luthor is confident he is what this country needs and only time will tell but before I go I will pose this question for Mr. Luthor if these so called meta human and vigilantes do pose a threat at what cost will you be willing to pay to stop them.

Then we shift to the home of Amanda Waller as she turns off her TV to hear her door bell ringing and she answers the door to see Lex Luthor

Lex Luthor
Can I have a moment of your time Amanda

Amanda
Somehow I knew you come

We fade to black then we cut to a cave as we see bats fly by and then Jonn appears as he comes through the wall then the camera view whips around to the back of Jonn where we see batman working at his computer.

We show Batman hands stops typing

Batman
What do you want?

Jonn
Im impressed. I usually can sneak up on anybody not to mention read their minds
As Jonn walks towards Batman we see Deathstroke lying on a cot in a holding cell

Batman
Consider that my gift detective

Jonn
So you know

Batman
I tend to keep tabs on people of interest.

Jonn
Just know im not your enemy.

Batman
Thats good to know because I have two pounds of kryptonite for the boy in blue and from what I gathered all I need is a box of matches for you

Jonn
I see you do your homework but im not here to fight. I need your help

Batman
Help for what?

Jonn
Let me show you

Jonn places his hands on Batman head then we go to a close up of Batman eyes as they open and we fade to black We go to the credits and after the cast and director is shown the screen goes black and we here voices talking

Voice
You were so close my lord to finally obtaining it. To finally recreate the universe in your vision.

Voice2
This was just a slight inconvenience but now that I know its there nothing will stop me from obtaining it.

Voice
What about this human Lex Luthor

Voice2
A pawn nothing more


Then we see from a distance two men standing

Voice
And what of earths champion. This Superman

Then the camera zooms in to reveal Darksied

Darksied
Superman wont matter because in the end he like everybody else will kneel before Darksied


Then the camera zooms out showing his palace, his army and slaves and the hellish world that is Apocalypse and as we see the planet in space then we go to the end credits.

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MagnusRex22
MagnusRex22 - 9/4/2013, 5:02 PM
This needs to go in "Fan-Fic," not news
bjames11
bjames11 - 9/4/2013, 5:02 PM
What
MrCBM56
MrCBM56 - 9/4/2013, 5:02 PM
WTF?! I though you meant a real movie...put this in Fan-Fic.
LEVITIKUZ
LEVITIKUZ - 9/4/2013, 5:03 PM
YOU BASTARD I THOUGHT THIS WAS THE POSSIBILITY OF A MARTIAN MANHUNTER MOVIE LIKE IT'S ANNOUNCED!!!!

*LEVI COCKS GUN

NovaCorpsFan
NovaCorpsFan - 9/4/2013, 5:04 PM
I'll give this a read when I have time.
ALegendaryPanda
ALegendaryPanda - 9/4/2013, 5:04 PM
-___-
ruadh
ruadh - 9/4/2013, 5:05 PM
I read the beginning and the ending. The end is a little too reminiscent of the Avengers.

I'd really recommend reading scripts. Find copies of scripts for movies you like. Reading is the best way to learn how to write. Even Stephen King says he reads an hour for every hour of writing he does.
SnapperCarr
SnapperCarr - 9/4/2013, 5:06 PM
Damn it
Emjeed
Emjeed - 9/4/2013, 5:07 PM
So you figured the best way to get us excited was to write a bogus news headline? We're all fans and we like to support fellow members in their endeavors. So there was absolutely no need for this. Just make it an editorial and ask us to give you our opinions and we will. You must be new here. Shit like this is why articles get taken down
Abary
Abary - 9/4/2013, 5:08 PM
Hey dude, guess what? Huh, huh, huh? Hey... Guess what? C'mon, just guess. C'mon...... c'mon dude, guess what? Huh? Huh? Huh? C'mon guess.... You gotta guess what? C'mon dude... guess what... man just guess what? Huh, guess what? Did you guess yet? Huh, did you? Did you? Did you? Did you? Hey.................................................................................. guess what?












DIDN'T READ LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO
Emjeed
Emjeed - 9/4/2013, 5:08 PM
Make it FAN FIC **
Bearjew
Bearjew - 9/4/2013, 5:11 PM
Hey dude that's cool but two things: Martian Manhunter is his superhero name so I would call it that despite Manhunter being a better title. 2. Change to Fan Fic
Ryden
Ryden - 9/4/2013, 5:54 PM
I agree with ruadh you need to read some scripts before setting out to do it yourself. I would also recommend that you think about your dialogue more carefully, try to imagine how it would sound on-screen because at times it comes off a little bit unrealistic. Other than that, good effort.
SnapperCarr
SnapperCarr - 9/5/2013, 12:01 AM
You do realize that MM has actual Middleton supporting characters?
Why not use Diane Meade or Captain Harding or Lieutenant Saunders or Patrolman Slade or Officer Mike Hanson?
NovaCorpsFan
NovaCorpsFan - 9/6/2013, 7:16 AM
K, that was actually quite good. Props man!
sting29j
sting29j - 9/7/2013, 2:06 PM
thanks for the honest criticism
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