Ben 10: Time for Battle Part I: Time Isn't On Thier Side

Ben 10: Time for Battle Part I: Time Isn't On Thier Side

I swear the first Ben 10 fan fic on CBM

By Ben100000 - Nov 18, 2010 12:11 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic



In The Time Steam a rumble is heard. Paradox and Azmuth float as they hear. “The Time Stream is closing in on it’s self” says Azmuth. “So the entire Universe will begin all over again” says Paradox. “And we will cease to exists” says Azmuth. “We must contact Ben Tennyson” says Paradox. Meanwhile at Ben’s House. “Kevin, you’re on the news again” says Gwen. Kevin runs to the couch. “Dang, again” says Kevin. “Everybody’s talking about you” says Gwen. “Well it’s about time” says Kevin. “How did you even get in” says Gwen. “Doors are really weak” says Kevin. The Door opens up. Albedo stands at the door. “Albedo, what do you want” says Kevin. “Your help” says Albedo. “Why” says Kevin. Albedo moves to the right. Vulkanus runs to him. “ALBEDO” Vulkanus yells. “What about the Omnitrix” says Kevin. “Oh yeah” says Albedo. The Omnitrix pops up. Heatblast appears. Albedo slams it down. “Hey Vulkanus over here” says Heatblast. “Albedo I’ve been looking for you” says Vulkanus. “Oh yeah me to” says Kevin. “Kevin watch out” says Albedo. Vulkanus runs at Kevin. “Oh no” says Kevin.

Meanwhile in the Null Void. Sixsix and Aggregor sits in there cell. “This is not approved by me” says Aggregor. “Well you’re not getting” says Tetrack. “Oh yes they are” says Vilgax. “Vilgax” says Tetrack. Tetrack shoots Vilgax. Vilgax blocks it. “Why” says Tetrack. “Because Paradox wants them” says Vilgax. “Ok” says Tetrack. Tetrack types a code into a small box. Aggregor and Sixsix run out. “Part one complete now Tetrack I need Chromastone” says Vilgax. “I’m on it” says Tetrack as he teleports away. Meanwhile back at Ben’s house. Vulkanus hits Heatblast. Tetrack teleports there. Tetrack shoots Vulkanus. “I’ve been defeated” says Vulkanus. Albedo changes back to normal. Tetrack grabs Albedo. “GIVE ME CHROMASTONE” yells Tetrack. “Ok I’ll give you Chromastone” says Albedo. Albedo transforms into Humungousaur. “Meet Ultimate Humungousaur” says Albedo. Albedo slams the Omnitrix and transforms into Ultimate Humungousaur. Albedo slams the ground and makes an earthquake. “Oh come on Albedo” says Tetrack. Tetrack takes off his suit and it’s acutely Ben. “I’m goanna pound ya” says Ben. Ben transforms into Rath. “Ain’t no one goanna get out of here alive” says Rath. Rath bites Albedo. Albedo slams Ben into Kevin. Kevin moves his hand on to the Omnitrix. “Well this can’t be good” says Kevin. Kevin explodes. “KEVIN” yells Gwen. “Hey anodite over here” says Rath. Albedo slams Ben through a wall. Meanwhile in the Time Stream. Kevin appears. “Where am I” says Kevin. “At a front row seat to the end of the universe” says Paradox. “What happened to me I’m Rath” says Kevin. “Indeed” says Paradox. Meanwhile at The Null Void. “We’re all most there” says Vilgax. D’void appears in front of the portal. “Vilgax, prepare to die” says D’void. Vilgax shoots D’void.

Meanwhile at Ben’s House. Rath hits Albedo in the face “Sirius butt kicking” says Rath as he slams Albedo on the ground. Albedo turns back to normal. “I thought” says Rath. Ben turns into Big Chill. “Ben, are you ok” says Gwen. “Get your hands off me” says Big Chill. “Yep not ok” says Gwen. Big Chill flies off. “I have to find him” says Gwen. She calls Julie, The Helpers and Grandpa Max. Meanwhile on the Rustbucket. “Ben’s doing what” says Grandpa Max. “What another test” says Manny. “Ben’s ran off” says Grandpa Max. “Isn’t that Ben” says Helen pointing at Big Chill through the window. “MAX” yells Ben .
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DetectiveCinema
DetectiveCinema - 11/18/2010, 12:45 AM
It's a BIG improvement! Really is!

maybe put some more spacing. It looks a bit bunched up and makes it hard to read, spread it out more, maybe add a few pictures?

Anyways your improving man! Keep it up!
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 11/18/2010, 1:03 AM
MrMurdock@ Thanks man that means alot
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 11/18/2010, 3:57 AM
who put thumbs down
Ibz
Ibz - 11/18/2010, 4:44 AM
try and paragraph dude it helps when people are reading
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 11/18/2010, 6:04 AM
ben10 @ Dude, it is a BIG improvement, but like MM & Ibz said 'spacing' (paragraphs) probabaly the only reason you got a thumbs down, I'll give you a thumbs up or even it out lol okay! : P

But BEN, this is more what you should be doing, than that Batman season thing, its bringing out the bad in everyone lol, anyways nice read even though I know [frick] all about the character, actually I saw the first live-action movie and also done an article on the second live-action movie ages ago here on 'news' --- that any good, actually just got it on DVD?

Anyways much better work, but do a bit more spacing on your stuff though, not a good idea to have the whole lot in one chunk, anyhow cheers.
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 11/18/2010, 3:37 PM
LEEE777@ Meh 50/50 actings horible plots O.K. and Nanomech is cool
Ibz
Ibz - 11/18/2010, 6:23 PM
well done you FINALLY used paragraphs
thunderguy123
thunderguy123 - 11/18/2010, 8:51 PM
nice job.. even in paragraph form it
looks cluttered, but
thumbs up because it was a nice read.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 11/19/2010, 3:20 AM
Cheers @ BEN! :)
Vafrous
Vafrous - 11/19/2010, 7:33 AM
Hey Ben, this is much better then your Batman stuff...keep up the good work,man...
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 11/20/2010, 10:39 PM
CHAPTER 2 A FROSTY NIGHT
CHAPTER 3 BIG CHILL'S KINGDOM
CHAPTER 4 THE VREEDLES RETURN
CHAPTER 5 ESCAPE FROM AGGERGOR
CHAPTER 6 SAVING PRVIATE KEVIN
CHAPTER 7 THE COLENY
CHAPTER 8 ULTRATRIX ACTIVATE
CHAPTER 9 ENTERING THE FORGE OF CREATION
CHAPTER 10 SAVING THE UNIVERSE
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 1/28/2011, 3:14 AM
note preview of part 2
"HEY UGLY" Manny says. " How dare you" Big Chill says. Big Chill shoots at Manny. Manny jumps. Big Chill punches Manny's face. Big Chill grabs Manny by the throat. "Hey over here" Alan says shooting Big Chill. Big Chill easily blocks it. The blast hits Alan. He flies into the Rustbucket. "Alan" Cooper says. "Cooper no" Max says. Big Chill shoots Cooper. Helen runs around Big Chill. Meanwhile in the Null Void. D`Void is shooting Vilgax."Taste my staff" Aggergor says shooting his Staff at Animo. SixSix shoots Animo off of the rock. Vilgax walks up to the portal. "The Null Void is free" Vilgax says lifting his arm in the air. Vilgax walks through the portal. Meanwhile on a busy street. Julie and Gwen are on a motorcycle. "So Ship just took it" Gwen says. "Yep" Julie says. A giant portal opens in the middle of the street. Vilgax, Aggergor,SixSix and hundreads of soldiers walk out. "Attack" Vilgax says. Meanwhile at the Rustbucket. Helen is still running around Big Chill. "Enough" Big Chill says. He punches Helen through the door. Max walks out in a plumber suit.He shoots Big Chill. The bullets shoot Big Chill's wing. "PAIN" Big Chill schrecks. Max grabs up on Big Chill and grabs Big Chill's neck pulling it up.
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