Introduction to Spiderman 4

Introduction to Spiderman 4

A short intro I wrote to the upcoming Spiderman 4 movie.

By MidKnight35 - Apr 17, 2009 01:04 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Outside of a large bank in NYC. People are in a hurry and buzzing past eachother quickly. On the steps of the bank we see three men walk up the steps towards the bank and put on ski masks. The bust through the front door and one of the men has a mysterious yellowish ski mask on and gauntlets on his hands. The other two are armed with shotguns. The man in the yellow mask yells “This a robbery everyone on the floor now!” A sense of panic and commotion rushed the occupants of the bank as everyone his the floor. The man yells again “Everyone remain calm and no one gets hurt, now someone show me where the safe is. A teller frantically shows the huge safe vault doors. The man then points both his fists towards it and an eery buzzing starts producing from his gauntlets. A blast of air fires from his hands and blows the door clean off its hinges. The man in the yellow runs into the vault with one of the other masked me and start throwing money into a duffle bag. The other masked man watches over the room of people making sure no one makes a move. Outside the bank a police officer is sleeping in his car as the police radio says “Bank robbery in progress on 34th all units be advised men are armed and dangerous”. Above the cop car you see a man in red and blue tights swing by down the street. Back inside the bank the men have filled their bags and are making their way towards the doors to the bank. Spiderman swinging, crashes through the glass doors and kicks one of the masked men. The other one points his gun at him spiderman disarms him as he fires a shot, which hits the ceiling. Spiderman punches him in the face knocking him out. The man with gauntlets begins the laugh. Spiderman says “What is so funny chuckles? Drop the bag and turn yourself in now!” to which the masked man responds by pointing his fists at spiderman and blasting him with a beam of the concentrated air. The blast knocks spiderman into the wall.


The masked man hurries out of the bank with the money and jumps into the back of a van. Spiderman gets up rubbing his head and says “when will these guys ever learn?” and then he swings into action chasing the van. The van speeds past the cop car with the sleeping cop, waking him up and startling him, he spills coffee all over himself. The police radio then says “One of the armed men has been identified as the criminal known as the Shocker.” The cop then watches in awe as Spiderman swings in pursuit of the van. Then about three cop cars follow also in pursuit. The doors to the back of the van are open and the Shocker, is hanging out the back firing blasts at spiderman. The blasts miss and are taking chunks out of buildings. The Shocker turns to the driver and yells “Can’t this thing go any faster he’s catching up!”. Spiderman swings into the back of the van kicking Shocker, knocking him out. He then taps on the driver’s shoulder and says “Andretti, I think you should probably pull over now.” The next scene shows the cops taking the Shocker away in cuffs, his gauntlets are removed. Spiderman is swinging away. A close up of Spiderman swinging and the words Spiderman 4 appear.



Beginning credits roll. Flashback montage of the previous movies.

Peter is walking into Dr. Conners class, sees Gwen Stacy smiles and waves then takes his seat. Dr. Conners begins lecture. The lecture is over cellular repair and how the use of reptile DNA allows reptiles to regrow limbs. Gwen raises her hand and answers several questions. At the end of the lecture Dr.Conners says “And finally, I know you have all been waiting for this, which one of my students is going to assist me with my new experiment.” Peter looks in anticipation hoping it is him. Conners says “The lucky student is… Ms Stacy, congratulations.” The class applauds and Gwen looking surprised blushes and says thank you.

After class Peter approaches Gwen and congratulates her on getting the assistant position. Their conversation is then interrupted by a handsome long black haired man. Gwen says “Oh hi Michael!” obviously blushing. Peter looks disgusted. Michael says “Hello, Gwen. I heard you got the last assistant position. You know that means that you and I will be working a lot together.” Gwen replies excitedly “I know, I am really looking forward to it!” Michael says “Well Gwen I will see you tonight at dinner.” Peter looks to Gwen as they are walking away and says “I don’t know what you see in him, the guy is a total creep.” Gwen says “Oh Peter, its funny how boys can get jealous.” She then walks away leaving Peter.

I am currently writing the rest of the story. This just starts the movie off with a bang and sets up the plot for the story. The villains will be The Lizard, Kraven the Hunter, and an introduction to Morbius at the end of the film setting up the sequel.

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ManOfIron
ManOfIron - 4/17/2009, 8:48 AM
not bad. kinda makes you wonder what happened to MJ though. why would Peter be jealous if he has MJ? that kinda thing. not bad though. i could see it happening. (i'm probably the only one who wishes this) i wish Shocker would have a bigger role. i like the character. i see him and think Spider-man. i guess its cuz i grew up in the 90s w/ the cartoon and they used him a lot. who would you cast for Morbius and Shocker? and who is Andretti? that name sounds familiar. Its probably obvious but i'm drawing a blank. Refresh me.

P.S. can't wait to see what happens next. Great set up
MidKnight35
MidKnight35 - 4/17/2009, 11:14 AM
@ManOfIron: Andretti is a joke, he is driving the van fast like the F1 racer, Mario Andretti. MJ is still very much in. In fact the next scene involves MJ. I plan on playing a love triangle between MJ, Gwen, and Peter. As for casting, I am having the absolute toughest time casting Morbius. I can not use a big name because he has a relatively small role in this movie. As for Shocker his role is small and he is masked and says few lines so an unknown actor with the build could be used. I did cast Sean Bean for Kraven though. The intro of Morbius for the SM5 also gives way for Black Cat.

@Dellamorte: Gwen won't be around for long, hate to spoil my story but, she will die eventually.
Joslezio85
Joslezio85 - 4/17/2009, 1:57 PM
All in all good story. I like Eric Bean as Kraven, I think he would do a very good job. Can i suggest Erica Mabius as Morbius. He's a good actor, who has had very few good roles. It seems, he only gets shitty offers, with terrible writers. But, I think given the chance, and a good script, he could do very well as this hyper active vamp...moving on. Black Cat. I've heard a few different people suggest Hayden Panettiere. I love the idea, personally. She's a hottie. She's got the right curves. She's got pretty close to the right look already. Just have to lighten her hair, and she's got the acting chops to prove she can do it. Just a suggestion. But, like I said. Good story,
ManOfIron
ManOfIron - 4/17/2009, 6:47 PM
haha i knew i heard that name before... like i thought was gonna happen lol i look like a tool lol
JoshWilding
JoshWilding - 4/18/2009, 3:29 PM
that would be a perfect cameo for a character like Shocker! Im not too keen on Morbius as a Spider-Man villain-I would prefer to see maybe Electro or Scorpion
TheShakeBake
TheShakeBake - 4/18/2009, 10:31 PM
I totally agree with shocker i even had the same idea i just cant write worth shit lol and kraven and lizard good. No to morbius just no i love him in the comics but he is not movie material rhino or scorpion or vulture one of Spidey's classic villians.

See Ya, The ShakeBake
jimdrums
jimdrums - 4/21/2009, 3:54 PM
I think this could work, although Kraven is not my favorite villian I do think that he would be well recieved by many, I hope that Spidey 4 is successful
Ironman453
Ironman453 - 4/22/2009, 1:23 PM
cool
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