Legends of Eden- Rise of Zagan part 1

Legends of Eden- Rise of Zagan part 1

Heroes and villians gather together, but are they ready for the danger ahead?

By HeavenlyDark - Nov 28, 2010 04:11 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Legends of Eden – Rise of Zagan

Narrator(Adoneal): North side of Eden at about 8:02pm we were all called in by Psychonaut cause he says he has got something important to tell us I don’t know what his game is but he has got every villain and hero of Eden sittin in the same room around the same table.

Psychonaut: Thanks for coming at such short notice now I’ve seen and heard a lot of crazy things in this life but listen up cause this one is goin take the cake.

Gold Wolf: Are you gonna tell us why we’re here or not cause I got a vampire sittin across from me eyein my neck.

Psychonaut: Shut it!! This is probably the most important thing you’ll ever hear in your life.

Red Lightning: (coming between the two) Then start from the beginning so we get everything.

Psychonaut: You’re right. (clears throat) Twenty years ago there was a demon from Hell named Zagan who out of rage of how “slowly” the Devil was taking over the universe decided to break away from Hell and create a new one by destroying planets and creating Hell planets that would join to his body….

Yoroku: Wait does it look like a massive dark force that no light can shine through.

Psychonaut: yes but hold on there’s more….(Looks at Yoroku) Zagan tried to destroy your planet and failed but…

Yoroku: Yes and my father gave his life and destroyed that demon. (standing proudly)

Psychonaut: Mostly….. (An awkward stare is shared between the two) Your father destroyed most of him but a little part of it fell down into Eden. From there it started engulfing parts of the city and even turned parts of the city against themselves resulting in Eden’s civil war.

Sonic Wave: How could we forget that? It’s what started the old heroes and they stopped the civil war making them the greatest. I mean ever now people see the old heroes as even better than us in every way.

Psychonaut: Yes I know now can you guys stop interrupting me and let me finish. (rolls his eyes ) now even though the civil war ended the old heroes never figured out about Zagan, but I have and hes been “recruiting” people ever sense then and now he’s ready to take over. Now I’ve called all of you here because for most of us like Yoroku our lives have been affected by Zagan and we know that this demon needs to be stopped.

Devil Blade: Good luck with that his army is huge and powerful most likely will rip us apart in the first clash.

Psychonaut: Yes I know but we’re the last line of defense between Zagan and the world and we have to prepare for war. Now for some reason Zagan told me that he’s going to attack in five days from now and in that time we have prepare for everything. Go out and tell your loved ones goodbye, tie up any loose ends, and get your most powerful weapons, powers, or amour ready for battle.

There’s a silence around the room as each hero and villain look at each other knowing that in five short days it could all be over. Some are thinking about who they will say goodbye too first, some are thinking about how they will prepare for battle, and some are thinking about if they can run away or hide from all this.

Psychonaut: Look I know this is a heavy thing to lay on all you because we’ve never had to face anything like this before and even I’m scared but we have to formulate a plan of attack so we can live through this.

Dimension: I’m willing to talk to The Five… (Looks of confusion)... My superior, and see if they will help, or at least tell us how to weaken Zagan.

Energy Spike: I’ll do an analysis on the physiology of Devil Blade and see if I can’t create something to weaken the army’s soldiers (Looks at Devil Blade) If you’ll allow me.

Devil Blade: Its cool, I’ve got nothing better to do anyway.

Phantasma: I’m going to summon up all the spirits I can find so we can have some spiritual support on our side.

Psychonaut: Good we’ll meet back together three day from now to check in, and start making a plan, good luck everyone and remember we only have five days till hell breaks loose.

Narrator (Adoneal): I came out of that meeting with two things in mind, 1 how will I tell my father who knows that his wife has slept with other men, had their children, and killed them all that his only surviving son will be going off to a face a demon so powerful it defies Satan himself? And 2 I need to find the child before the third day so I can get him to help us.

End of part 1

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Ibz
Ibz - 11/28/2010, 5:07 PM
should it be "rise of" instead of "raise of"
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/28/2010, 5:20 PM
yeah i forgot about that but i fixed it.
Frogman
Frogman - 11/29/2010, 1:35 AM
nice way of bringing the characters together!
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 11/29/2010, 11:10 AM
GR8 read @ HevenlyDark, I agree on what Frogman said, cool stuff!
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/29/2010, 1:20 PM
@ Frogman thanks
@LEE thanks man i didnt know if this was going to good enough or not lol.
Please me guys if you dont like something in here cause i want to make this as good as it can be.
Frogman
Frogman - 11/29/2010, 1:41 PM
Some of the dialogue could be improved, theres nothing wrong with it I just felt reading some of it, it could be said differently, if you get what I mean?
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/29/2010, 2:15 PM
@ frogman thank you for bringing that up, and i understand that and i'll make sure that i fix it to make it even better :).
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