HeisenbergSaysRelax's pitch for 'GOTHAM'.

HeisenbergSaysRelax's pitch for 'GOTHAM'.

HeisenbergSaysRelax explains, in detail, how he'd have handled Fox's TV series "Gotham" had he'd been in charge. New storylines, new characters, new arcs. Come check it out!

Editorial Opinion
By HeisenbergSaysRelax - Sep 29, 2014 10:09 PM EST
Filed Under: Gotham

"Gotham", the TV series that focuses on a pre-Batman Gotham City, recently aired it's second episode on Fox and while watching, I began to think about how I'd handle this series. The more I thought about it, the more I wanted to share my vision. I decided to take a few minutes and form a quick pitch of sorts, so please, read on and let me know what you think.

Before we begin, I should give you a bit of information about how my version of Gotham would work. The primary difference would be the villains. Unlike the current series, we would NOT focus on characters like Penguin and Selina Kyle (at least not yet). Instead, we'd begin the series with two primary focuses/storylines...
 

GORDON AND THE G.C.P.D.

The primary focus of the series would be Detective Jim Gordon. At the start of season one, Gordon would have just received a promotion to detective. Along with his promotion comes a change of venue as he and his fiancee Barbara move to the city of Gotham. 

Gordon knows Gotham is basically a giant sewer and views this as a challenge.  He plans to clean up the streets and clean out the police department. He's paired up with Bullock and the two men take on a series of cases involving high ranking members of the mafia who have all been found decapitated.



Gordon digs in deep and forms a theory that someone is targeting the mafia leaders in an attempt to disassemble the groups. "Cut off the head of the snake and the body dies" he says. He theorizes this may all be some sick form of vigilante justice. An attempt to rid the city of organized crime.

Bullock encourages Gordon to turn over the case, but Gordon refuses and begins to grow suspicious of Bullock. We reveal that Bullock is being blackmailed by a mysterious source (who is heavily implied to be the person responsible for the murders). Bullock owes money to a lot of bad people. These people have been letting him slide since he's a cop, but this mysterious source claims that if Bullock doesn't cooperate, his badge won't be able to help him. 



Since Gordon won't turn over the cases, Bullock is told to sabotage them and begins doing whatever he can to slow down the case from planting/destroying evidence to "silencing" witness. This causes tension between Bullock and Gordon and causes Internal Affairs to launch an investigation into Bullock's activities.


THE WAYNES AND THE FALCONES


The secondary focus of season one would be Thomas Wayne. Unlike Gotham, I wouldn't kill off Thomas and Martha in episode one. I'd save that for later. Instead, I'd do what no other live-action Batman story has done. I'd focus on them. I'd build up their family, their relationship and then, I'd tear it down. Rip everything away. I feel, once you know Bruce's relationship with his parents, it'll be that more important when it's taken from him.

Season one would deal with Thomas Wayne, head of Wayne Enterprises and chairman of the Wayne Foundation, as he struggles to deal with pressure from local crime boss Carmine Falcone. Falcone believes he can use Thomas' status, power and prominence in Gotham to his advantage.

Thomas spends the majority of the season struggling with what to do. He has no desire to help the Falcones as he blames them for all the city's issues, but he fears that refusing to help could endanger his wife, Martha, and their fifteen year old son, Bruce.



Throughout the season we'd build up Thomas' role as a family man. He cares about his family more than anything and strongly believes his son, Bruce, will someday change the world. He constantly reminds Bruce to do the right thing, no matter what. Though Thomas often gives Bruce this advice, he doesn't seem to be listening to himself, as he continues to ponder what to do about the Falcones.


One day at school, Bruce witnesses another kid being bullied and steps in. He ends up getting his ass kicked. When his father questions him about it, Bruce claims he got involved because it was the right thing to do. He claims it's what Thomas would have done. This affects Thomas. He realizes what he has to do and refuses to help the Falcones.

SEASON ONE FINALE


Season one would wrap with a final episode in which Gordon is approached by internal affairs and asked to help with their investigation. They want him to wear a wire around Bullock and inform on him. Gordon agrees, but only because he sense that Bullock is working against him in the investigation and wants to know why. At this point, it's less about doing the right thing and more about solving the case, no matter what. The only way for Gordon to do that is to find out what Bullock knows.


Bullock meets with the mysterious source, who we reveal is Black Mask. Black Mask has been killing off high ranking members of various mafia families in an attempt to cause a disruption in leadership, so that he can step in and unite the families. He believes that if all the families are operating under one leader, he can use their combined power to take over Gotham.


After Thomas refuses to help the Falcones, Carmines tells one of his men to get rid of him. Later that night, Thomas, Martha and Bruce wander into an alley after watching a movie and Carmine's man pulls a gun. He kills Thomas for refusing and, as Thomas bleeds out, the man kills Martha. He flees before killing Bruce. We hold on Bruce as he collapses to his knees then slowly pull out as he begins to scream, cutting to black.



 
WHY I CHANGED BRUCE'S AGE


I'm sure this will be asked about a couple times, so I'll just explain now. Gotham has been playing fast and loose with the character ages for the most part, so I thought it'd be interesting to recast Bruce Wayne and have him be a few years old. This was mainly done to add the potential for Kick-Ass style vigilante work in later season. I figured by making him a teenager, we could explore a sort of ProtoBatman.

 

SEASON TWO AND ONWARD

My goal with season two would be to follow Gordon as he continues to investigate the Black Mask murders and Bullock. We'd follow Bruce Wayne as he begins taking steps to become Batman, possibly even engaging in acts of early vigilantism that usually fail. We'd also follow Black Mask's storyline, which would consist of him attempting to over take the crime families, only for them to find out what happens and turn on him, creating a massive gang war in Gotham.


This might all be a bit rough. After all, I'm writing this at 9:30 at night with very limit experience with pitching and article writing. Either way, hopefully someone gets a kick out of this. Lemme know what you think in the comment and if you have any questions, feel free to ask.
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McGee
McGee - 9/29/2014, 11:15 PM
DEVLIN712
DEVLIN712 - 9/30/2014, 12:21 AM
Sounds better than the actual show (which I like), I'd watch it.
MightyZeus
MightyZeus - 9/30/2014, 2:15 AM
This is some interesting stuff that i would love to see.

Awesome work.
kong
kong - 9/30/2014, 4:23 AM
I love this stuff!!! Do more!!!!
DrKinsolving
DrKinsolving - 9/30/2014, 5:49 AM
Yes. Awesome ideas, they definitely should have kept Wayne's parents around longer and it was a perfect chance to develop Falcone's character.... They missed a huge opportunity, it would have gave so much weight to Wayne's parents death and it also would have added depth to Bruce's character and his relationship to Alfred....

Alphadog
Alphadog - 9/30/2014, 6:08 AM
I agree that they should've developed the Waynes for a season but Bruce should be the same age he is in the show. We should start by having him incapable of doing anything going through a growth and then start to train. By season 4 or something he would be 2 years older and that's a good time to see him being exposed to the outside world. Then go from there and by the eight season he'll be right around the age he should leave Gotham which is around 18 years old.
EhMaybeSays
EhMaybeSays - 9/30/2014, 6:53 AM
The Wayne's should have been killed in the finale of S1 but then Bruce wouldn't have had development.
Scorn
Scorn - 9/30/2014, 8:36 AM
I could see Bruce being a vigilante a few seasons down the road.
Hulksta
Hulksta - 9/30/2014, 6:11 PM
Actual Show: Kind of Lame
Heis' Version: Kind of Awesome

This is a great article, time to celebrate.

CapitanAmerika2
CapitanAmerika2 - 10/1/2014, 9:58 PM
I'm going to go against the grain here a bit and say that I really like Gotham the way it is (waits to see if the other users will start throwing stones before continuing) because I like that it is not just Batman's origin being told in this series but the origins of many of his villains like the Joker, Penguin, Catwoman, and Poison Ivy among others. Now I'm not saying that this pitch isn't good because it is, but what I think you and TheIncredibleHulksta are missing is that this show is not just Bruce's story or Gordon's story but the story of everyone who is important in the Batman mythos, and I'd rather see an arc for everyone important to the story drawn out rather than just explained in an episode or two. Good job though.
CapitanAmerika2
CapitanAmerika2 - 10/1/2014, 10:51 PM
Now something I would add to the series has to deal with the fact that the identity of Bruce's parents killer and The Joker are both unknown at this time in the series. I would make it to where Bruce's parents killer becomes the Joker once again. I thought that was an absolutely brilliant move on Tim Burton's part when he made his first Batman movie, and I want to see it again because I think it really deepens the hatred that Batman has for Joker. It also gives Batman some interesting character development as he debates on whether or not he should kill the Joker to avenge his parents' death or if he puts him in jail even if it means he'll probably face him again. Where I would differ from Burton is that I wouldn't have Joker forget that he killed Bruce's parents. This would allow Joker to become even more of a threat to Batman and his loved ones because he could figure out his identity at some point like if he's ever giving a version of the famous Killing Joke monologue when he says, "What made you what you are? Girlfriend killed by the mob, maybe? Brother carved up by... Oh HAHAHA I can't believe I didn't see it. Your bad day was when I killed your parents all those years ago BRUCE WAYNE! You better say goodbye to anyone you care for cause I'm coming for them now! HAHA HAHA!"
Snotzo
Snotzo - 10/2/2014, 4:31 AM
I would like an 8 episode arc featuring a serial killer in Gotham, who is none other than... The Weeper, who can also be set up as an inspiration for the Joker.
Drakenxtreme
Drakenxtreme - 10/2/2014, 11:53 AM
Im also going to go against the grain and say i like Gotham and the potential it has and im already liking the feel and characters...Your idea i like up until you mentioned Black Mask....Black Mask is the same age as Bruce...Roman Sionis and Bruce grew up together...Their parents were rich and Roman parent's disliked the Waynes but because of the Wayne position they did what most rich people do..play nice to include forcing Roman to be friends with Bruce...This crucial part of his background is what makes Black Mask a great character and foil to Batman...So No i cant get on board with adding Black Mask to a show that takes place while Bruce is a kid when they are both the same age. Unless you just plan on delving deep into Roman and Bruce's frenemy relationship..please do not include him...that goes for any villain...i get certain liberties can be made to some villains background but some you have to keep true or only alter a lil bit..
ScottMontgomery
ScottMontgomery - 10/2/2014, 3:17 PM
I really wished Gotham was just an adaptation of Gotham Central, great f.ucking comic.
HeisenbergSaysRelax
HeisenbergSaysRelax - 10/6/2014, 12:04 AM
@CaptainAmerika2 and @Drakenxtreme made me realize that I wasn't clear enough. I don't dislike Gotham. I actually really enjoyed the second episode and I'm very curious to see where it goes and how each character is handled. This pitch wasn't me trying to take away from Gotham or claim that I could handle the series better ('cause god knows I'd probably create a giant mess). I was just elaborating on how I'd do things.

I do like the show though.

As for thinking that adding Black Mask would be a bad idea, I see where you're coming from and I do agree that certain origins should be left alone, but I also think certain characters (like Black Mask) lend themselves easily to being legacy characters. DC has various characters that take on the mantle of former villains and I think Black Mask could lend himself well to something like this. Though this isn't what I was going for, but I think it could work on the actual show. Assuming they ever add Black Mask, it'd be very easy to make him a mob boss with a Black Skull mask and have him be unrelated to Roman. Perhaps Roman even admire this man in a Bronx Tale/Goodfellas type way. I dunno. I'm just spitballin'. There's a lot of ways you could work Black Mask in though, I think.

I feel like if it's executed well (like Joker in TDK), it's easy to forgive a change of origin. It all comes down to execution of the change imo.

Thanks for reading.
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