Greetings.
I recently finished the first issue of a planned limited series that I have been plotting for several years. "Renegade Hell" is about a group of disparate young adults with supernatural talents that are brought together by a man named Sebastian who is shrouded in mystery. The plan for Renegade Hell is for it to take the form of a Comic Book Universe of shared stories with Renegade Hell spanning several volumes as I have stories mapped out for 10 plus years of these characters lives and beyond but it all has to start some where and it starts with this very script.
I'd appreciate any and all feedback as the goal is to get this to be as perfect and well-rounded as possible to pitch to artists and others who are interested in creating a comic series with me.
To access the script, please click the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bx8mM27Y4_zZREQ0T3psY0xZNjQ/view?usp=sharing
Thank you,
Niksynfinity