Green Arrow Excerpt OAU: For Consideration

Oliver is trapped in a make shift city that's empty, except for the villainous gargoyle...Hit the jump for more!

By Hellsboy - Jan 02, 2014 05:01 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Oliver gasps for air as he wakes up in what seems like a street in the middle of starling city, but there is no sky just a ceiling above the buildings with giant overhanging lights nearly sixty feet above the rooftops.

"Wonderful" Oliver says...
"Anybody here"?

No response, as he looks around, he realizes that he's in his green arrow suit complete with his quiver and bow. But he has only three arrows, all his own regular carbon fiber creations. All he remembers, going to sleep in his mansion, then waking up in this place.

"Alright I'm gonna ask this once, WHERE THE HELL AM I???"
A steely voice answers "Your tomb Oliver!"

Standing on one of the buildings is a figure who appears to be made of stone with hooked horns and a devilish face.

"Maybe yours but not mine" Oliver replies.
"Who are you?"
The figure answers "I am a watcher, an observer, and I've been watching you through all your escapades as the Green Arrow, like a gargoyle sitting a top the rooftops".
"Make no mistake, you will die here" as he jumps down from the building toward Green Arrow........ To be continued




I Hope you enjoyed this excerpt. Tell me your thoughts below
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Alphadog
Alphadog - 1/3/2014, 12:42 AM
I like what you wrote here but you should had a paragraph where you talk about the plot. Like I said in another article, people are starting to write their ideas and it's important to know what everyone is planning so that there isn't any conflict of ideas about how a character should be portrayed. Some people are going to craft their own story around a character and if we get two people that clash ideas than one of them is going to have to start all over again. That doesn't seem like it's going to be a problem for you because you haven't introduced major characters (Besides the Green Arrow) but you should still do it. I myself am planning on starting a Superman comic with thestarlord and there's a lot of characters who's origin would be involved in it so it's kind of hypocritical for me to say this. Fortunately I haven't seen any ideas until now that clash with that but stil.
GuardianDevil
GuardianDevil - 1/3/2014, 1:38 AM
Pretty dang good! Love Green Arrow, keep it up bro!
Hellsboy
Hellsboy - 1/3/2014, 6:16 AM
@Alphadog
Yeah I was gonna write his origin later this week the basic outline for it and see what people wanted to add or delete but this is my own personal story but I get what you mean
@JJ63
Thanks man!
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