Legends of Eden- Deminsion

Legends of Eden- Deminsion

Where would you go to save the one you love?

By HeavenlyDark - Nov 23, 2010 02:11 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Name: Dimension, Lee Davis



Age: 18

Power(s): able to cross and create portals into any dimension he wants and has an inter-dimensional gun that can be shot through dimensions and the bullets can be controlled by Dimension. His suit also translates any language, also him to breathe anywhere, and can adapt the physics around him so he can go anywhere.

Origin/Story: Lee was an only child who lived with his grandmother in Eden who despite his years of martial arts training never fought anyone, but would protect anyone. One day his grandmother caught a more deadly version of the Black Death (because it was alien in origin) and was rushed to the hospital where they treated the symptoms but they’re insurance wouldn’t pay for the surgery needed to cure her of the virus completely.

So Lee goes out doing odd jobs for months paying for his grandmother’s hospital bills and saved as much as he could for the surgery, but it was never enough so Lee tries to rob a store but was caught. Due to his clean record he was not charged any jail time but had to pay a large fee and do community service leaving him with no money, or anytime to get a job so he couldn’t raise any money. Caught between a rock and hard place Lee hears from another convict about that a tournament is being held with large sum of money as the grand prize and anyone can enter, so he enters with the drive to save his grandmother from death. During the Tournament five judges watch the matches to determine the winner and as the tournament goes on Lee defeats all his opponents and get to the final round where he fights with all his might but sadly is defeated though he tried many times to win.

Defeated Lee walks out of the tournament ashamed, but is called aside by the convict who told him about the tournament and he introduces him to the five judges who tell him that the tournament was a front for a recruitment test and even though he didn’t win the tournament he didn’t ever give up in his fight for what he needed. They show him that the five judges are actually leaders of an inter-dimensional order called The Five and the convict is actually a dimensional fighter called Rift that keeps all the dimensions safe from one another (like dimensional cops) and they just recruited Lee and give him an antidote that will cure his grandmother. After his training he becomes a member of the dimensional order and is given the code name Dimension based off of the corps he was trained in and is put on duty to fight any and all dimensional disturbances even if that disturbance comes from the Dimensional Order.

(countdown to Zagan: 3)
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MikeKus34
MikeKus34 - 11/23/2010, 3:13 PM
@Dark - Hey dude that's a pretty cool concept. I'm gettin' a definate Green Lantern vibe offa this one. Good job man lookin' forward to whatever else ya got for us! :)
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/23/2010, 3:23 PM
@Mike sorry didnt mean to give it that feeling i didnt notice that until now but thanks for reading :)
Frogman
Frogman - 11/23/2010, 3:24 PM
"countdown to Zagan" - nice man, intriguing too. Keep it up!
MikeKus34
MikeKus34 - 11/23/2010, 3:34 PM
@Dark - Dude dont worry about it all. Makes it that much cooler, and it definately works for the character aswell. Really cool dude, and never apologize for your creations man! These have been really good. Woulda commented before, but I've just recently signed up.
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/23/2010, 3:39 PM
@Mike thanks and its no problem im happy you like my stories

MikeKus34
MikeKus34 - 11/23/2010, 3:41 PM
@Dark - Fer sure dude, keep 'em comin'!
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 11/23/2010, 4:42 PM
HevenlyDark @ I like your stories too! :)

...and hey, this is the best one yet... yay for LEE!


; D
MikeKus34
MikeKus34 - 11/23/2010, 6:00 PM
If I can just make one suggestion, well I guess it's a question that implies a suggestion, but why is it that only teenagers are effected by strange things in Eden? Like is it a story element, something about Eden? Or is it so as to be more relateable to yourself. Because, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but I dont think there's been one over 18 years old, has there?
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/23/2010, 7:24 PM
@LEE hahaha thanks your awesome

@mike yes there are a few that are and there are two reasons for the young age

1. im only 17 and yes its so that it more relateable to myself. that and when i first made these characters they range from eight to twelve years old cause that was around my age.

2. they are supose to be the next generation of heroes that Eden gets after the ones before them retired 10 years before they did and this is my fault because i didnt explain any of this in any of my current stories though i did plan on adressing it in the tie-in.good question :D
MikeKus34
MikeKus34 - 11/23/2010, 8:05 PM
@Dark - Fair enough :) and that's gonna be really cool with the older generation, that makes a ton more sense. Thanks for clearin' that up dude!
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 11/23/2010, 8:31 PM
@mike no problem if you ever have any questions about any of my stories please ask i want to know all the plot holes and faults :D
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