The Man that Smiled

The Man that Smiled

Please read this tell me what you all think. Like or dislike -- tell me what to make better. This is just something I had written months ago. I found it saved on my computer thought I'd post it. It's just notes... A small story that is unfinished. Please help me with the story. Thanks!

By hawkngo - Jul 02, 2009 01:07 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

On a Dark Chilly night in shabby bar, the bartender looks across to see how buissness is going. and smiles to him self “This is a good night”..After looking around he spots two men sitting down by the window booth. Both look very concerned,anxious, scared. He can see them whispering something.. he read the lips from one of the men.. one word something about “He” Getting out…Oh God…So he pour’s 3 glasses of some homemade brew..”Maybe he can persuade some info on what there talking about” and and right before he apporachs the booth one of the men jumps up “ Skinny fellow, unshaven, looks like he could use a bath and good nights rest” runs out of the bar gets in the his car..all you heard was tires hit the pavement and roaring out of “The Narrows”…..The guy inside of the bar(Overweight,unshaven) still there looks up and says “May I” and grabs the 2glasses and drinks one of ‘em down in a heart-beat! then the bartender ask what got him scared..the guy looks up and says “you don’t want to know” the bartender then thinks.. why not.. and says c’mon tell me it cant be that bad!.. This guy looks like he’s about to have a heart-attack then whispers “He’s Out” the bartender says “Who”???
The Guy had something in his hand bartender didn’t notice it before.. must of had it there hidden, the Guy reaches up and puts the item in the bartenders glass…it looked like a playing card of some sort..he puts his hand in the glass pulls it out and it sure was a playing he turns it over and He said to himself “Oh God…this cant be” a smiling face and said I’m out, get ready!!…..then the guy in the booth falls over…gasping for breath.. The bartender cant do anything..sitting in shock, scared..the most chaotic,syochoatic,mass murdering man is out of Arkham…… “The Joker”……
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Lex Luthor President of the Untied States….says Lex his first full day in the white house…the election was a landslide…said in the Daily Planet, USA Today, Washington Times,Gotham Times, in other news “Bruce Wayne Disappears again“, Batman Dead, Crime Rate about 51% ok….., The Puinsher still at large..no ones going to catch him here anytime soon..chuckling to himself.., Then out of nowhere..He see’s Arkham Inmate Escapes, Believed earlier to be the Joker!..Oh Shit says Lex…Time to see if this clown can handle his taste of his own medcine…..He punched a button and says “Mercy can you come in?” One of the hidden doors open walks in a beautiful woman even though she’s his head of secret service…he says “Mercy can you please bring in our dear friend Frank so we can take care of an issue of mighty inportance!!!. Hopefully Frank can be good and take care of this matter..God Help us if he cant!!!
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He hated hearing the sound of his alarm clock ….Max roll’s over and see’s a beautful woman and child lying there sleeping…he gets up not trying to wake them..hops in the shower,brushes teeth,shaves, combs hair, Puts on his usual set of clothes..in 45mins he’s walking out of the house gets in his car…and Drives down to the Precint…not even looking at the newspaper..Headline reads “ Murder in Gotham…. Barbra Gordon Shot!!! Critcal Condition….Joker Related????”
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This meeting better hurry up and get over moans one guy, another protest of why we here???Metal dectators in the back ,Two men were setting up a T.V and switches on and Sal Moroni says Good Evening Gentleman Thanks for making it here..We have an issue it seems that our own Gotham Hero “The Bat seems to dissappeared for ever“, and we keep hearing about these murders its not the joker I promise you this because I went and saw for myself he’s there..still playing slodtaire..lol..then out of nowhere” this low then high pitch Laugh. shierks though ou the back of the room…walks out a man in Purple pant, trench coat, green vest, green tie, hair messed up, Paint smeard on to his face, but what made him real was that Sal Maroni knew this was the real Guy.The Scars, Laugh, Messy hair, looking like a mainac… The Joker!!!
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Joker knew what he was doin..all along…even in Arkham, Dr.Quezenll..”Harley” she said..Stamped his papers Cured and was released..but what some people didn’t know that he’s out to get his city again, no batman, no gordon, nobody but the mob was in his way… create choas at a different level…more deaths equal more funny moments…but who will he test,or do these great thing’s with,oh but he already had a plan and it was goin in full tilt since his release….. Max was the name
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Storm was coming..off in the distance you can see the lighting rays flashing across the horizon..He hopes he will miss the storm but probably not..this idoit loved to talk a lot,about little gods in red capes not sharing power, and a bat disappearing into the night.. All these things questioned if he made the right decision…Mr.Clean or we all should say Pesident Clean..wanted this target gone and buried ASAP!..But he knew the risk..hedidnt mind killing, but this guy love to test people, push them to the limits, and killing was one of his tools of mischief…this guy he read in the papers was always smiling..or they said a pernment smile, looked like some guy went off the deep end…well look at me I’m killing people, mob bosses…the papers gave me this nickname called “The Punisher”.. wow someone had too much time on the hands. better than Batman, Superman, or whats the other name heard of … “The Joker”………..
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“Doorbell Rang” who could this be hopeing it was jennie coming to pick her up for some bingo charity night.. But to her amazment it wasn’t…she screamed in horror…a flash of light warm,pain felling hit her instaley. She could not move,she could scream for her dad.. Her dad was be beaten,shot,laughed at, and then she felt her clothes being torn form her body and flashes of light..a cmera she thought….the the most chillen sound she will never forget..the clothes..were black,a female?????…..Barbera Gorndon was screaming..that smile, over and over in the hospital nurses coming by to calm her…she kept crying…and crying….she knew her dad was dead, and she knew who was responible…
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At a far distance in the dark the city of Gotham became ablazed with choas. Yes its true..the clown prince of crime is doin his dirty work!..time to take him out. But why is he standing in the middle of the street. Wait is that him????…looking through the scope of his sniper rifle frank sees a tall swaggery man smeared in paint with a tommy gun, fireing ramdoly …but with a zoom of 2ft..he cant tell. So he fires misses the clown’s head by an inch…the clown ducks and runs..[frick] I lost him thinks Frank……..
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Max walks through the old doors of MCU Commisoner Gordon old HQ…He was reesigned to this unit from New York….wondering why here..too much Shit to handle…Too many freaks, like Two-Face “also known as DA Harvey Dent who did work with both Batman and Gordon back when Chaos was really reeling.”, , Bane, and this so called Superman….Yeah…even the so called man of steel…Payne!!!! Get in here yells Commissoner Eckhart…Welcome to the Major Crime Unit. We know all about how you Yanks took out major crime in New York…I wanted some one with experttise in this field to help out with our promblems down here..with President Luthor at the top of the food chain..we can do a lot of things to prevent chaos!..Well here is your partner meet Dectieve Remeraiz..she use to be with Commishnor Gorden when he was on this earth..
Glad to meet you says Payne…Glad to be here..whats on the list today..
Det.Remeraiz: well you heard about Batman disappearing and the Legendary Joker out we have to keep a close eye out..Even with this so called punisher out on the loose…Payne chuckles “Punisher” why called the “Punisher”..She says well the story is when he and his family was out in a pinice they witnessed a crime being made..an exucution..the mob found out and excuted his family..they thought he was dead..but they were wrong..he went out taking out every mob family…so called sources say Moranio’s Next!!!.Were gonna be staking out his place and with the joker out..it’s even more Dangerous!!with those two out..it will be hell on earth!!!
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Joker loves to tell everyone his scar story….even to Batman..he loved picking fights with batman..to push him..to take risk, to see how far can the clown push the dark knight!..He did once with blowing up Rachel dawes..but DA Harvey Dent was supposed to be the fryed one but with one side of his face charred and burned he became a viglante on the loose killing all who betrayed him with a flip of a tricked coin..He called himself “TwoFace”he loved it but his life was taken by the Bat…oh well…only one will remain…and it’s me..any who..time to give this ole’ town a wiege again..laughed Joker…why is it that Batman disappears when Bruce Wayne leaves….hmmm. Maybe there the same..nahh Waynes too playboyish to kick ass….anyways time to give ole Mr.clean a vist..but how to get past Sercurity is no problem maybe some joker gas should do the trick..HAHAHA…
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LEEE777
LEEE777 - 7/2/2009, 1:44 PM
Well, i like it! ; )
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 7/2/2009, 2:22 PM
Your some section KEV lol!

Again,,, building that fan club KEV! ; D

Heyyy, i thought the article was a good read, did you even read it KEV?

I'LL BE BACK!!! : D
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 7/2/2009, 2:32 PM
: D
alten2345
alten2345 - 7/2/2009, 6:41 PM
Actually shouldn't this be in the fan fiction section not the editorial section:)
10THTIGER
10THTIGER - 7/5/2009, 12:36 AM
GOOD READ
SirJediFrank
SirJediFrank - 7/10/2009, 11:18 AM
good linking of the separate stories.
just check the grammar, separate one idea and dialogue from each character, it doesn´t matter that the text takes more space, as long as it is easier to read.
C4
C4 - 8/2/2009, 4:15 PM
you could have a futur in it but, your inovative spelling of psychoitc (syochoatic) could end up spelling c.h.a.o.s. for a gotham car-rear. your doin great except that your showing the age of an artist that has few experiences. bring more apathy or sympathy to the story and your batphone should start ringing with bat offers.
example: when discribing situations put your self in someones shoes.is the bartender watching the badguys talkin bout joker. maybe their wiskey is watered down with home brew, and if it is who in the room knows.
standing in lex shoes i dont belive in brushing my own teeth but instead would have a playboy centerfold do it for $100,000.00
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