RECAP: Peter gains his powers, starts to fight crime, but one night coming home from a high school party, Sees his Uncle Ben dead, as he realizes, that he was irresponsible, and he caused his Uncle's death and to this day he still makes theories on how it could have been avoided (NOTE: I took away the wrestling part of the Spider-Man origin because, well I just didn't like it, this is my vision for a Spider-Man story.)
-"GET OUT!! GET OUT NOW I SAID DAMNIT!!! YOUR WORK HABITS SUCK, YOU DON'T COME FOR 2 DAYS!! DO YOU TAKE ANY OF THIS SERIOUSLY PARKER?! DO YOU?!" The manager at Mcdonalds said. "Um, well you see I was um--- listen I'm really sorry if you just--" Peter replied. "I DO NOT WANT TO HEAR A GODDAMN THING FROM YOU, YOU SLEAZY TEENAGER!"
-SPIDER-MAN: TROUBLED SLINGER
-(PETER THINKING TO HIMSELF) "MAN! How am I going to help Aunt May with all the bills she's trying to pay."
-PETER LOOKS AT HIS WATCH IT SHOWS THAT IT'S 8:45AM
-"CRAP, I'M LATE, OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!" Peter said.
-"Maybe Peter Parker can't get there on time, but Spider-Man can!" Peter said to himself.
-QUICK SHOTS OF PETER CHANGING INTO SPIDER-MAN INTO AN ALLEY.
-"Woowee!!!!!! Spidey yelled out loud as he swung through the New York buildings.
-PHOTOGRAPHY QUICK SHOTS OF THE DAILY BUGLE, EMPIRE STATE UNIVERSITY, JOE'S PIZZERIA AND DR. CONNORS LAB.
-BRRRRRRIIIINNNNGGGGG!!! A bell rang.
-"Oh great a bank robbery? Now, Jeez louise, what kind of a world do we live in?"
Peter thought to himself.
-Spider-Man swings through the air and does a sommersault and freefalls down to kick a robber in the face.
-OOOOOOOOO! One Point for Spidey here you suckeroony!
-Spider-Man's spidey sense tingles and kicks the other robber's gun away.
-"You going to feel alot Spidey, a whole lot of me inside you." the robber said,
Spidey replies saying, "That's what she said?" The robber says "OH SHUT UP ALREADY!"
-Alright, Alright, that's what he said. Spidey says.
-Then Spider-Man makes a quick move then punches him in the face.
-"SCHOOLED HOME BOY!" Spider-Man yells.
-Quick shots of Spider-Man swinging away and the thugs are knocked out.
-BRRRRRRIIIINGGGG!!! Another bell rang, this time the school bell.
-"Oh Great, block one is over, better luck next time Parker" Peter thought to himself
-Peter turns behind and sees Harry Osborn.
-"Oh Hey Parker, how you holding up with your Uncle's death?" Harry said.
-"Um doing okay I guess, see you in block six Harry" Peter replied
-Quick Shots of Peter and Harry walking away from each other.
-Peter then quickly becomes alone in the halls.
-BRRRRRRRIIIIIINGGGG!!!! The school bell rings stating that school has ended for the weekend.
-"Oh man, What a day, F in the science test because I didn't study because I had to fight Dr. Octagonapus BRRRRAAAGHH by the way, Jeez, what's going on with my life, Liz broke up with me, I have a black eye, and for christ's sake to top it all of, MY UNCLE IS DEAD, and the killer is still on the loose. *sigh*" Peter thinking to himself.
- *GASP* "My spider-sense is tingling" Said Peter. "OOOFF!" Peter thought to himself "What the hell was that?" Peter then scratches his head.
-Quick Shots of Peter running from something, then quick shots of Peter changing into Spider-Man in an alley.
-Quick Shots of Spider-Man swinging through the New York City skyline.
-RING! RING! Peter answered his phone "uh hello Aunt May? Yeah I'm just gonna try to apply for a job, yeah yeah don't worry I'll be home in 30 mins, Wait who's coming?" The phone call ended. "Jeez louise, just my luck, I have to sit down with a special you know who *sigh* son of a bitch."
-Quick Shots of Peter jumping on top of The Daily Bugle and changing the doing a Yo-Yo Spidey down the vent shaft.
-Shots of Peter opening the door.
-"Is Mr. Jameson here?" Said Peter.
-"He's in that room, the one that says J. Jonah Jameson." Said the beautiful Ms. Betty Brant.
-"No shit Sherlock." Peter thought to himself.
-Peter then opened the door to see a staff member get fired.
-"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?!" said JJJ
-"Um, I'm the guy with the pictures, of--of Spider-Man, you wanted to see it." Peter replied
-"Oh right, right, sit down kid." JJJ said.
-"Anyways, My name is Peter---" but before Peter could say anything J. Jonah Jameson stopped and said "Stop, I really don't want to get familiar with my employees until the third day, now let me see the pictures. Mhmmm, Uh huh, Okay, I see I see. Most of them are bullshit photos." JJJ said.
-"Beg pardon? I took these very well I'm pretty sure these pictures are very good I took the Photography job in the school paper." Peter replied.
-"Tell you what I'll take these pictures of Spider-Man for 300 bucks." JJJ said
-"But Mr. Jameson that's pretty low for these many pictures." Peter replied
-"I'll buy you something, MEAT! I'll buy you nice Christmas meat, and freelance, best thing in the world for a kid your age." JJJ said.
-"Okay" Peter said.
-"NOW GET OUT KID, I'M BUSY HERE!"
-Shot of Peter getting pushed out and Jonah slamming the door on him.
-"So I finally got bumped up as a photographer, now I gotta return home before 6:30 cause I have to eat dinner with the Stacy family." Peter thought to himself.
-Shots of Peter changing into Spider-Man.
-Shots of Spider-Man swinging through the New York skyline, he sees smoke in the distance. "Oh Shit, what happened now" Spider-Man said.
-Spider-Man does a bunch of acrobatic stunts in the air and swings at the same time then shoots two webs in mid air and launches himself inside the burning building.
-"HELLO?! ANYONE HERE!!!" Spider-Man yelled out. Spider-Man hears a cough in the distance then uses his spider-sense to detect where that person is. "Oh my god, it's Harry." Spider-Man thought to himself.
-Spider-Man then web-zipped over to him.
-"It's okay, I got you, put your arm around my shoulder." Spider-Man said.
-Shot of Spider-Man jumping out of the fire then landing on the ground.
-"Thank you Spider-Man you saved my life." Harry said.
-The ambulance then carried him away.
-Just then a huge menacing figure arose from the ashes and fire, and his eyes were horribly yellow with ripped clothing, and carrying a messenger bag, his head was bare, and he had the ears and shape of a goblin, and he was also attached to a glider, then he threw a goblin grenade at the firetruck.
-"OH GREAT" Spider-Man said, he then webbed the grenade then through it back at him.
-The mysterious figure then got furious and flew away.
-"I'm going, chief." Spider-Man said to the police officer.
-"GO! GO!" The officer replied.
-Spider-Man then swung after the mysterious figure, then he caught up with him then he shot a web on his glider. "So I bet you got a taste for the theatrical, like that one guy in that Christopher Nolan film."
-The Goblin just looks at him, and just then 4 blades pop out on his fingertips. With Spider-Man surprise his Spider-Sense activates telling him to dodge, "Oh Boy this cannot go well, Oh I hope those are rubber blades, I think I should ask him." Spider-Man thought to himself. "
-He then activates his Spider-Reflexes and dodges every single finger blade The Goblin throws at him.
-"Hey, I know I'm probably gonna regret saying this, but are these rubber blades?" Spider-Man asked. "FIND OUT FOR YOURSELF PARKER!" The Goblin replied. Spider-Man was shocked when he said Parker, but his Spider-Sense was too late to trigger, the three of his finger blades pierced him in the shoulder,
-Spider-Man then pulled out the finger blades, and shot his webs at him, blinding him temporarily, giving Spider-Man enough time to hop on his glider and beat him up. "WHO THE HELL ARE YOU, AND HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME!" Spider-Man asked furiously. The Goblin then ripped off the webbing and punched him off his glider, but Spider-Man recovered quickly and swung back at with two webs, and slingshot himself towards him kicking The Goblin in the face. Spider-Man then punches him then The Goblin catches his punch "IMPRESSIVE!" The Goblin remarked with sarcasm.
-The Goblin then kicked him off the glider once more, and Spider-Man only to have more bad luck run out of web fluid.
-"WE'LL MEET AGAIN SPIDER-MAN!!!!" The Goblin yelled.
-"Jeez! This is not good." but before he could fall, he was caught by someone, Spider-Man then looked up and saw that it was The Avengers. "Spider-Man as long as you're here, mind helping us fight the baddies?" Captain America asked. "Why not" Spider-Man replied.
(RECAP: SPIDER-MAN beats the shit out of The Skrulls with the Avengers.)
-"Okay Peter, you can do this, GOD! why is Gwen here of all the people, Gwen, the girl I've loved since, well since ever, and aw man, she's in every bit the woman I want in life, the first time I saw her in Grade 6 and when the teacher first asked for Gwen, then I saw her, she was the perfect jewel, she had no flaws, and when I'm about to enter this door, I'd see her. GET READY PARKER!! BRING IT!!!!!" Peter thought to himself.
-"Hey guys I brought the can of Cranberry sauce!" Peter said.
-"Oh terrific! Now we can all eat!" Aunt May replied
-"Let us say grace, then we can eat." Aunt May said.
-INTERMISSION FOR ABOUT 10 SECS.
-"So, Mr. Parker what do you do for a living?" Captain Stacy said. "Not much to tell really." Peter replied. "Peter is a Photographer for The Daily Bugle, aren't you Pete?" Gwen said. "Oh right, I got the job, Aunt May!" Peter replied.
-Captain Stacy was just looking at him, examining him.
-"Parker, you wouldn't have pictures of that wall-crawling criminal?" George Stacy asked.
-"Um, Mr Jameson has it, so yeah sorry I can't give you the photos." Peter replied.
-After a long night, The Stacy's thanked for the good meal, and left.
-"Oh man, what was that, you are probably the most [frick]ed up person I've met." Peter thought to himself.
-"Peter, are you going to sleep?" Aunt May asked.
-"Oh yeah, Um good night." Peter replied
-Aunt May looked at Peter when she herself was about to sleep, Peter was still wide awake just sitting in his work chair.
-"I missed him a lot today." Peter said.
-"I know, I missed him too, but he was there watching over us while we ate." Aunt May replied.
-"Yeah. I just feel that when I went to the party, Uncle Ben was so alone, when we had our first argument, he was just sitting there on the couch, then before I knew it, he was gone." Peter said.
-"Don't worry Peter, it'll be alright kiddo, go to bed now." Aunt May said.
-Aunt May then kissed Peter on the forehead.
-Peter, was then alone, he then pulled up his briefcase, and saw his costume ripped apart, he then set it aside, and remembered what his Uncle said to him.
"WITH GREAT POWER COMES GREAT RESPONSIBILITY"
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN SWINGING TO THE GREEN GOBLIN AND DOING A MID-AIR ROLL AND SHOOTING TWO WEBS TO AVOID A TRUCK HE WAS ABOUT TO HIT.
-"Goblin! You need to stop this, please! You don't know what you're doing!"
Spider-Man said. The Green Goblin ignored his plea and swatted him off into a wall. "ALRIGHT THAT'S IT!!!" Spider-Man said.
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN JUMPING FROM A BUILDING TO ANOTHER, THEN LANDING ON A CAR, ONLY TO JUMP HIGH IN THE AIR AND SHOOT A WEB TO DO A SWINGING TWIRL. THEN CONTINUE SWINGING TOWARDS THE GREEN GOBLIN.
-SPIDER-MAN JUMPED FROM HIS WEB AND TACKLED GREEN GOBLIN INTO A PIER.
-"WE'RE ENDING THIS RIGHT HERE RIGHT NOW!" Spider-Man said furiously. Green Goblin grabbed his face and smashed it into a foundation of the pier.
-"I AGREE, PARKER" Green Goblin said. Spider-Man then jumped up on his feet and dusted himself and said, "My name is Spider-Man you intolerable [frick]ing asshole!!!" Spider-Man then launched himself at The Green Goblin launching himself and Green Goblin into the air, with Spider-Man pushing himself away from him, then shooting two webs at him launching himself back at him kicking him in the chest, Spider-Man did this action repeatedly 10x
-SHOTS OF GOBLIN FLYING ON HIS GLIDER BACK TO OSCORP, WHILE FLYING LAUNCHING A FIREBALL AT A PART OF A BUILDING WHERE CAPTAIN STACY AND GWEN IS RIGHT NOW.
-SHOT OF A PIECE OF DEBRIS FLYING DOWN AND NEARLY HITTING A LITTLE BOY BEFORE CAPTAIN STACY PUSHING THAT BOY OUT OF THE WAY ONLY TO SEAL HIS OWN FATE BY BEING CRUSHED.
-CUTS TO BLACK
-A SCREAM IS HEARD AND SPIDER-MAN SAYING "OH NO."
-A SHOT OF CAPTAIN STACY'S FUNERAL. AND PETER FAR AWAY FROM THE FUNERAL, CROUCHING ON TOP OF THE CHURCH, LOOKING DOWN ON GWEN.
-PETER THEN TURNED AWAY, FROM THE CHURCH, AND DID A FACEPALM.
-CUTS TO BLACK
-A voice spoke, "I made a huge mistake, I let down Gwen, I let down Captain Stacy, and most of all, I let down Uncle Ben, I promised him responsibility, and now look what happened.... Maybe I should give up.....
-Shots of Peter pulling out a briefcase, with his costume in there, looking at it one last time, then closing it. Before setting his costume on fire....
-SHOT OF A DAILY BUGLE ARTICLE, "CRIME IN NEW YORK UP 80%"
-CUTS TO BLACK
-SPIDER-MAN: TANGLED SLINGER
-SHOT OF PETER IN HIS ROOM, SITTING DOWN ON THE SIDE OF HIS BED, CONFLICTED.
"What am I going to do? I feel so empty, after everything that happened I'm still not right."
-FADES TO BLACK.
A voice inside Peter's said, "Peter, you should remember this, even after I'm long gone, With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility, with every heart that bleeds will color your world red, and the sorrow in the night will be the blue you cannot shed, but your strength will be a vision, beyond visibility, and the gift I've woe before you, will give you new eyes to see."
-Peter then opened his eyes. He then pulled out his suitcase and saw a design of his costume, he laid it down, and then pulled out an extra suit. And he now realized what he has to do.
-CUTS TO BLACK.
-Shots of Spider-Man swinging throughout the New York air, and jumping off his webs, aswell as stopping several crimes, such as a bank robbery, and a mugging, and stopping Shocker.
-SHOT OF A DAILY BUGLE HEADLINE, "SPIDER-MAN IN ACTION, EXCLUSIVE PHOTOS INSIDE.
-A WHITE FLASH THEN BLINDED THE SCREEN
-Shots of Spider-Man climbing up a wall, and hunting a carjacker, and finally Spider-Man swinging on top of a pole, showing a shot of New York City's skyscrapers.
-"I think it's time I tell Gwen the truth, it's time she knows.." Said Spider-Man while falling through the sky and leaping onto another building and catching a pole.
-Camera turns around and shows Spider-Man's back and The New York scrapers,
(V.O Spider-Man) "What?! My Spider-Sense is going crazy?! What the heck's wrong?
-Camera goes First person and the camera slows down for a second, and fast, leading us to Gwen's house.
-"HELP!! SOMEONE HELP ME!! OH NO, HE'S COMING FOR ME, PLEASE HELP, SOMEONE!! Gwen yelled out.
-(V.O SPIDER-MAN) Goblin.... What have you done?
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN JUMPING OFF THE BUILDING AND SWINGING AS FAST AS HE CAN TO GWEN'S HOUSE, ANOTHER SHOT OF SPIDER-MAN REACHING GWEN'S HOUSE, AND HIM CRAWLING THROUGH THE BROKEN WINDOW.
-There was a note left attached to Gwen's bedroom wall, it said "If you want Gwen, you're gonna go to the Oscorp power plant, or else...
-Spider-Man then scrunched up the note. Shot of the crumpled note being thrown down to the ground.
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN SWINGING THROUGHOUT TOWN, AND SWINGING ON A POLE THEN JUMPING OFF THE WEB AND SLING-SHOTTING TO THE POWER PLANT AND LANDED ON TOP WHERE GWEN WAS.
-"Nuh-uh uh, Spidey-Boy" Green Goblin said while on his glider, Green Goblin then pushed Gwen off into the power plant.
-"NO!!!!!!!!!" Spider-Man yelled, he then jumped into the power plant falling along with Gwen then shooting two webs to reach faster to her, only a millasecond from reaching the vat of chemicals.
-Spider-Man then launched himself all the way up and landing on the side of a building. "Gwen?" Spider-Man said while moving her a little.
-"Peter?" said Gwen, Spider-Man then hugged her so, and shockingly replied, "How did you know??". "Don't play stupid with me, it's clear you were Spider-Man when you always spent too much time in the washroom." Spider-Man replied, "Well I thought you'd either think I got number 2 issues, or was jerking off to porn." "Go fight that douchebag already" Gwen said. She then opened half of Spider-Man's mask and kissed him. "Man I cannot catch a break!" Spider-Man said, and then he swung away.
-"OI! GREEN POWER RANGER, YES YOU!" Spider-Man yelled, "Time to.... ah damnit! I had a crappy insult but I forgot."
-Spider-Man then roundhouse kicked Green Goblin in the chest and followed up with a triple mid-air kick, Green Goblin dodged the third kick then through him off the power plant.
-Spider-Man then shot two webs back up at Green Goblin then pulled him down, and with them having a short mid-air battle, Spider-Man then got grabbed by Green Goblin and was thrown into the power plant, Spider-Man nearly fell, but he pushed himself into the exit that was there. "Come On pussy-pants! You afraid of my webs? If you know what I'm talking about."
-Shots Of Green Goblin chasing Spider-Man through the power plant, Spider-Man then jumped onto a pole and cannonball kicked Goblin with a surprise attack. Green Goblin then got kicked into an electricity circuit.
-With the whole place starting to blow up, Spider-Man then grabbed Green Goblin and went through the same way he came in, with the power plant exploding behind him, he barely made it out of the plant with seconds to spare.
-SHOT OF GWEN'S EYES LOOKING UPON THE DESTRUCTION OF THE POWER PLANT, SEEING A FIGURE FLY THROUGH THE HEAVY SMOKE.
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN SWINGING THROUGH THE AIR WITH THE GREEN GOBLIN BEHIND HIM, "Peter, it's okay, it's okay." Norman said, he then slipped off Spider-Man's arms, with Spider-Man looking in shock he tried to shoot a massive web, but was too late....
1 WEEK LATER....
"Harry, I'm so sorry for your loss, I just wish someone could save him." Peter said, "Where were you Peter, taking pictures of the bug?" Harry replied "But, Harry" Peter spoke.
-A news paper then flew in Peter's face, the headline said, "SPIDER-MAN: WANTED DEAD OR ALIVE, 1000$ DEAD, 15,000$ ALIVE."
-THAT NIGHT....
"Shot of Gwen looking out the window.
(V.O GWEN) "Sometime I know he's coming here to swing"
-SHOT OF A SILHOUETTE SPIDER-MAN SWINGING THROUGH THE MOON.
-There. A shot of Gwen then smiled, and said, "Go Spidey Go."
-SHOTS OF SPIDER-MAN SWINGING AROUND THE CITY, THEN THE FINAL SHOT SHOWS SPIDER-MAN SWINGING TO THE CAMERA, AND ZOOM INTO THE SPIDER INSIGNIA.
THE END.