Jeremy Slater's FANTASTIC FOUR Script Included 'Galactus', 'Mole Man', And Sounds Amazing

Jeremy Slater's FANTASTIC FOUR Script Included 'Galactus', 'Mole Man', And Sounds Amazing

Depressed about how Fantastic Four turned out? Well, before Simon Kinberg rewrote the screenplay, Jeremy Slater's version would have given us Doctor Doom as a Latverian dictator, the arrival of Galactus (in his true form), and even the Mole Man! Hit the jump for details...

By JoshWilding - Aug 18, 2015 03:08 PM EST
Filed Under: Fantastic Four
Source: Birth.Movies.Death
The folks over at Birth.Movies.Death have got their hands on Jeremy Slater's original Fantastic Four draft, and well, it sounds like every bit the Fantastic Four movie we should have got. Fox of course wanted to make the reboot on the cheap, so it's easy to see why this CGI and action heavy version ended up not being made. Looking through, it's easy to see the plot beats which were taken by Simon Kinberg and dramatically scaled down from a movie which would have seen the team on the run from Galactus to one where they're being chased down by pretty crummy looking green lava. 

The site breaks down the entire story in huge detail and I implore you to click on the link at the bottom of the page to check it out in its entirety. For now though, here are some of the main highlights which include elements from the source material which were sorely missed in Josh Trank's film. Not everything works perfectly, but this definitely sounds more like the Fantastic Four film we would have likely got from Marvel Studios. Do you agree? Let us know in the usual place!


  • As in the final film Reed goes to the Baxter Building as part of a science scholarship; there he meets Sue and Victor Von Doom. Victor takes the nerdy Reed to parties, where he meets and falls for Sue, but Victor’s not actually picking up girls at these shindigs - he is secretly feeding Reed’s research to spies from his homeland of Latveria.
  • In the script the Quantum Gate is very much that - a rip in space through which a module is passed on a big hydraulic arm.
  • What they find is not the empty broken landscape of the film but rather an alien city. The city is full of skeletons, non-human things that have been killed in some cataclysm. As the team explores the ruins they come upon an amphitheater full of corpses and something else. Something huge, and something wearing battle armor with two blades coming out of either side of its helmet.
  • The huge thing - Galactus, for those not in the know - chases the three explorers. He shoots Dark Matter out of his hands, enveloping and seemingly killing Victor. Reed and Ben make it to the module but it’s not working; on the other side of the portal Sue is working feverishly to fix the circuitry that won’t allow the module to return home. Galactus nears as Sue finally fixes the machine, and he blasts the module with Dark Matter - but the Dark Matter hits the Quantum Gate and there’s a reaction and the entire team - the two in the module and the two in the lab - are pelted with some kind of cosmic madness.
  • The script jumps ahead four years. Johnny Storm is a reality show star, although his show is dipping in the ratings. Sue is still at the Baxter Building, and she’s using her invisibility powers to look inside of patients suffering from serious cancers. Dr. Elder wants her to come work on the Moloid program, but Sue won’t - she thinks it’ll be weaponized.
  • As all of this is happening we cut to Latveria. Using the information Victor fed them, the Latverian government has created their own Quantum Gate. They send a team through and the module returns splattered in blood, containing only one occupant: a Victor Von Doom now made entirely of Dark Matter. He quickly dispatches everyone around him, using shape-changing abilities and shooting electrified razor wire from his hands. Within minutes he has slaughtered Latveria’s ruling elite and taken over the country.
  • At the same time thugs - called Shock Troopers in the script - assault the Baxter Building. In the chaos that ensues Dr. Elder gets Moloid juice on him and is transformed into Mole Man, while Shock Troopers inject a Moloid with Dark Matter.
  • Sue and Johnny stop the Shock Troopers when Reed shows up too late to warn them. But not too late to see that injected Moloid, now giant, burst out of the ground. Ben, who happens to be nearby looking at puppies in a pet shop window, hears the commotion and runs over. The team engage the giant Moloid, as seen on the cover of Fantastic Four number one, in a fight that is both exciting and humorous.
  • The rest of the script has the team coming together to go to Latveria, now the center of an international incident because Victor has built a giant Dark Energy cannon. He intends to use it to destroy Galactus; it seems that Victor’s only chance at survival in the Negative Zone was to act as Galactus’ herald and help him find a new world to eat - Earth. But Von Doom intends to destroy the Destroyer before that can happen.
  • The final battle is in Latveria, but it is revealed the shapeshifting Doom there is just a kind of Doombot; Victor is actually physically attached to the planet in the Negative Zone and has sent tendrils of his being to Earth. The film ends with him trapped in the Negative Zone, the FanFour telling the government Galactus is coming and the retooling of the Baxter Building as their home base and a school for smart kids who can help defeat the coming menace of Galactus.
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Reasonnnn
Reasonnnn - 8/18/2015, 3:24 PM
This sounds insane (in a good way). A bit overstuffed and likely very expensive (at least $170 mil) but really really promising and intriguing for a first draft.
BastTheGod
BastTheGod - 8/18/2015, 3:24 PM
whaaaaaa
RR51
RR51 - 8/18/2015, 3:26 PM
That still sounds bad, waaaay too much going on.
akidnamedcesar
akidnamedcesar - 8/18/2015, 3:27 PM
Everything sounded cool except for the whole dark matter thing.
sKeemAn
sKeemAn - 8/18/2015, 3:29 PM
This sounds much better than what we got. Its a little convoluted, but still better. It at least gives a good origin for Doom.
BastTheGod
BastTheGod - 8/18/2015, 3:29 PM
that was so bad, just no
IAmNotGr00t
IAmNotGr00t - 8/18/2015, 3:29 PM
Though not jaw dropping, would have been a much better film than what we got.
Liverpool4life
Liverpool4life - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
Fox! You screwed us again!
TheRationalNerd
TheRationalNerd - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
"The film ends with him trapped in the Negative Zone, the FanFour telling the government Galactus is coming."

Wonder if this scene in anyway was hinting at that...



Reed Richards: "What is coming?"

Doom: "The flopping. (pfffffft. *fart* alright I kid, I kid)...The answers."
bobevanz
bobevanz - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
I'm writing a trilogy then I'm sending it into fox and marvel studios. I'll share once I'm at that stage. I won't fail you guys!
Omario
Omario - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
Wow. Sounds like this could've taken an even darker tone plus you have multiple layers. It may have been a bit much, but yeah I like the Doom Bot/Dictator angle and Galactus tie-in.
sKeemAn
sKeemAn - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
This Galactus probably should be Annihilus
Benjamitesandwich
Benjamitesandwich - 8/18/2015, 3:30 PM
The only good thing is Galactus. Substituting Silver Surfer with Doctor Doom is a low blow, IMO. Either way, it would have still been a better movie.
DrKinsolving
DrKinsolving - 8/18/2015, 3:31 PM
Fox was the real villain
MercwithMouth
MercwithMouth - 8/18/2015, 3:31 PM
That would've been pretty cool.
MrMartyMarvel
MrMartyMarvel - 8/18/2015, 3:32 PM
Well…at least some stuff actually happens in this one.
hardxcorexchamp
hardxcorexchamp - 8/18/2015, 3:33 PM
This is much better than what we got, in so many ways. Yeah it would have been expensive and there's a lot going on but this sounds amazing. It was an original stories that wasn't a carbon copy of the comic yet still held true to the source material. THIS is what CBMs should be like.
Kyos
Kyos - 8/18/2015, 3:33 PM
a Victor Von Doom now made entirely of Dark Matter. He quickly dispatches everyone around him, using shape-changing abilities and shooting electrified razor wire from his hands.

Okay...

But yeah, all in all it sounds like it'd at least have been more entertaining to watch.
CinemaJackXCI
CinemaJackXCI - 8/18/2015, 3:33 PM
Liverpool4life
Liverpool4life - 8/18/2015, 3:33 PM
It's not perfect, but yes, it would have been better, as long as Galactus had the comic book body.
TheBeard
TheBeard - 8/18/2015, 3:35 PM
sounds almost as shitty as the movie just bombed.


TheRationalNerd
TheRationalNerd - 8/18/2015, 3:36 PM
@XxLIONHEARTxX

I'm curious, what would you have liked to have seen/experience?
TheBeard
TheBeard - 8/18/2015, 3:36 PM
*that
TheRationalNerd
TheRationalNerd - 8/18/2015, 3:39 PM
They should've just hinted at Doom in the film being a Doombot instead because everyone knew that wasn't Doom. The only thing is that they spent no time showing what went on with Victor on Planet Zero (falling in a pit of green lava at that) smh lol Man Fox, you really had me hoping for the best.
CherryBomb
CherryBomb - 8/18/2015, 3:39 PM
Sounds like the movie we got.
Not the story but that it starts off great but falls apart quickly during the middle.

CherryBomb
CherryBomb - 8/18/2015, 3:41 PM
I think this guy was high when he wrote this.
I like that Galactus sorta gave the team their powers but all that sh** about Doom becoming Dark Matter,
The 4YEAR TIME JUMP, Jesus Christ.
TheRationalNerd
TheRationalNerd - 8/18/2015, 3:43 PM
@Niklander

It does say...

"The final battle is in Latveria, but it is revealed the shapeshifting Doom there is just a kind of Doombot."


pesmerga44
pesmerga44 - 8/18/2015, 3:43 PM
Overall it sounds better then the Trank wreck we got but it sounds like it has tons of problems. The movie sounds overstuffed with everything and to get to everything properly in the script the movie would be about 3 hours. Just from all the points pacing sounds like it would be an issue because things change so radically from scene to scene. Truthfully this script sounds like it would turn into TASM 2 all over again. Just way to overstuffed with too many plots going on and terrible transitioning from scene to scene.
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