EDITORIAL: What's Wrong With GOTHAM (And How To Fix It)

EDITORIAL: What's Wrong With GOTHAM (And How To Fix It)

Having watched the series premiere of Gotham this past week, I have a few gripes with the show and wish to express them whilst also sharing ideas for how the show can improve on these areas!

Editorial Opinion
By Hulksta - Sep 27, 2014 09:09 AM EST
Filed Under: Gotham

So this past week, we were all treated subjected to the series premiere of Gotham. A show that's been highly anticipated by many, anticipated with a cautious skepticism, or even slammed before it aired. I definitely want to make i clear that while skeptical, I'm always excited to see new and exciting comic book properties and ideas brought to the screen, whether that screen be big or small. While I'll go on record as saying the premiere was mediocre at best, there's room for improvement and I wish to lay out my arguments against the show and offer some ways for the showrunners to fix it.

I. CINEMATOGRAPHY


My first area I noticed the show lost me was cinematography. The show seems to borrow elements from ?Batman Begins, as well as the Burton and Schumacker films in terms of painting Gotham as this dirty city. There's a lot of yellows and browns hroughout the show, and unlike a show like Agents of SHIELD which changes up locales, providing multiple opportunities to see the show with a different colour pallete, Gotham seems content with these drab colours. This isn't the worst thing in the world, as some movies and TV shows do quite well with a limited colour pallete; Gotham however stumbles in a few other areas and generally makes the limited pallete less appealing.

WHAT THEY CAN DO: This one is simple, all they have to do is clean up the shots. I mean, the contrast between Batman Begins and The Dark Knight is pretty apparent in how crisp and clear he shots are. Over time I'd like to see Gotham employ a similar ideas, especially as it thematically ties to Gordon cleaning up the city.

II. BENJAMIN MCKENZIE


Throughout the first episode, I found myself completely incapable of rooting for Gordon. I mean, he's in a city with people who stand for things. Mooney, Bullock, Oswald, and even Young Bruce Wayne; they all have motivations in the show, and they make it all make sense in a natural way. All McKenzie does as Gordon is basically stands in peoples way, but he's yet to have his moment that defines him. If this wasn't based off of a DC Comics property, I argue you'd have a harder time understanding the motivations and ideologies of Gordon on this show. There are exceptions to this like the opening scene where Gordon incapacitates the prisoner who wants his meds, or the scene where he refuses to shoot Oswald but it doesn't go nearly far enough; I actually find myself moreso waiting for McKenzie to become Gordon rather then Gordon to become McKenzie.

WHAT THEY CAN DO: While this is partially McKenzie's fault as an actor, I also think the directors and writers need to push McKenzie to try new things with the Gordon character while defining him a bit more then being Gotham's latest wet blanket.

III. CAMEOES


Part of the reason I find Gotham so irritating is that while the Bullock/Gordon relationship should be the focal point, we're now getting all these cameoes from various DC villains. Poison Ivy, The Penquin, The Riddler, and (possibly) The Joker all get introduced in this premiere. That's a lot of setting up, especially considering how inconsequential characters like The Riddler or Poison Ivy are to the story. They could and should focus on Gordon, but he's getting sidelined in his own show; and now I'm left confused on who's the protagonist of this show. Is it The Penquin? Selina Kyle? Gordon? Bullock? Young Bruce? The show seems more intent on showing off various DC characters then it is giving us an excellent origin story for Gordon. 

WHAT THEY CAN DO: Reducing on the number of cameos, or even making them more transparent. This should be Gordon's show and it frankly isn't as of the premiere.
 

IV. ALFRED


Why does Alfred have a cockney accent?

WHAT THEY CAN DO: Get an actor who won't sound like a retired rugby player and more like the distinquished Alfred.

That's it for what I think, but what do you guys and girls think? Make sure to click up the red thumb to like this article, and feel free to let me know what you think works and doesn't work with Gotham. For more on my views on Gotham and much more, make sure to tune into my podcast, the Three Angry Nerds podcast!

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GreenLantern519
GreenLantern519 - 9/27/2014, 9:22 AM
Alfred had a cockney accent in TDK Trilogy. Alfred in the show had a weird Australian/Cockney Hybrid.
Alphadog
Alphadog - 9/27/2014, 9:24 AM
Yeah the cinematography was amazing and Batman Begins had much better look than The Dark Knight. The Dark Knight was plain. Batman Begins on the other hand was really impressive. They should've developed that instead of making something that you could put in any movie.
supermanlives
supermanlives - 9/27/2014, 9:44 AM
I almost completely disagree with this list, I don't have the energy to dispute everything individually.
tonytony
tonytony - 9/27/2014, 10:02 AM
trollish article from a marvel fanatic. you are better off doing an article on how to fix agents of shield although I fear thats beyond saving.
TheManFromMars
TheManFromMars - 9/27/2014, 10:12 AM
I haven't watched Gotham but, somehow, I still feel I'd disagree with this...
Dingbat
Dingbat - 9/27/2014, 10:13 AM
I disagree with everything on this list except cameos. There were too damn many of those.

The cinematography however was absolutely beautiful; of much higher quality than AOS (season 1 at least). I don't think you could even argue that.

Alfred was awesome, and btw Michael Caine speaks in a cockney accent, Sean Pertwee does not. That is his actual voice.

Ben Mckenzie was a little sullen but it was a pilot. Give him some room to grow into his role.


Enough with the damn "How to fix Gotham" articles already. Nick Mundy? PUT THE ROCK IN IT!
Dingbat
Dingbat - 9/27/2014, 10:16 AM
@tonytony

It is a little ridiculous. AOS certainly does need fixing. I haven't seen the season 2 premiere but I've heard good things. Idk though, even when people said Season one was starting to get good I still thought it was kinda dumb. I'll download it right now. Be back in a couple hours.
UltimateCookie
UltimateCookie - 9/27/2014, 10:33 AM
I love comic book shows and I feel like AOS doesn't execute alot of things well. My favorite has to be Arrow, which I admit has its faults but you know what your getting with the show and fans are fans. You won't catch people watching Arrow for three seasons simply to see a Harley Quinn cameo. I want to see more of Gotham and I hope it improves even though I feel there are very small problems with it in general.
WYLEEJAY
WYLEEJAY - 9/27/2014, 11:28 AM
I figured out what my problem with Selina Kyle witnessing Bruce's parents murder. At first, I thought, oh, thats interesting. So when her and Bruce group up that should make their relationship more interesting. Then I remembered, Batmans way down the road. The show wont last that many seasons. Most likely. So instead they would have to do a jump forward in time if they ever change their minds about this show and decide to put Batman in it. So.....now......whats the point of Selina witnessing their deaths? Since we will most likely never see how this really interesting idea would affect Bruce and Selina relationship.
Hulksta
Hulksta - 9/27/2014, 11:59 AM
@WYLEEJAY I never thought of that but you have a point, I mean the show would presumably end with either Gordon as Commissioner or Bruce donning the Bat-Suit; but that's probably 3-4 seasons down the road, and then what?

I think the baseline problem here is that the show is way too ambitious for what it is or even will be.
huckfinnisher
huckfinnisher - 9/27/2014, 12:32 PM
@theincrediblehuksta, I think the cameo thing is a major problem for the majority of the viewers it felt extremely forced. I think though that it should be just about done now, after introducing nearly every character from Batman that has any ties to Gotham. DO you think the cameo thing will naturally taper off or are you of the opinion that they mean to use this gimmick every episode? Next episode we get cameos from young Killer Croc, Clayface, Puppetman, and Hush? I hope to sweet eight pound four once baby jesus that the pilot was only packed because they were trying to introduce all of the major players in the show quickly, and not as a formula for each episode.
huckfinnisher
huckfinnisher - 9/27/2014, 12:34 PM
@WYLEEJAY, great point 100% agree.
Odin
Odin - 9/27/2014, 12:45 PM
1) I disagree with this list.
2) Any chance you people watch more than a pilot episode from a tv show before going all Nick Mundy on it.

@Alphadog Agreed.
CorndogBurglar
CorndogBurglar - 9/27/2014, 12:54 PM
Being a huge fan of Gotham Central, the thing that really bothers me with this show the most is how Montoya and Crispus Allen are portrayed. Absolutely terrible what they did to their characters.

I get that they didn't actually call Crispus Allen by his name at all, so twchnically he could be some other person, however I find it hard to believe that they would go out of their way to cast someone that looks like him if it wasn't.

Allen is supposed to be a calm and collected intellectual person. He was portrayed as a hotheaded prick which really doesn't do that awesome character any justice at all.

And Montoya being an old lesbian lover of Barbara Gorson is just stupid.
MrBlackJack
MrBlackJack - 9/27/2014, 1:51 PM
Well it is only a pilot.
Darkknight2149
Darkknight2149 - 9/27/2014, 2:15 PM
Alfred has a cockney accent because I think he's supposed to be based on Earth One Alfred (the same version of Alfred that the Beware The Batman version was based on and that Jeremy Irons is rumoured to be playing). The show borrowed a lot from Earth One and from other stories that took place in the early days of Batman and/or were centred on the GCPD. Man Of Steel (the 2013 movie) also borrowed from Superman Earth One and DC has announced several more Earth One titles, so it appears that Earth One is DC's equivalent of what Ultimate Marvel used to be.
WYLEEJAY
WYLEEJAY - 9/27/2014, 2:34 PM
@huckfinnisher. Damn......that many cameos coming up? I thought it was just to prove a point in the pilot ya know? Like, here's Batmans baddies, so you know its all connected. I enjoyed the pilot quite a bit, but cameos that often, they should slow that down. I love AoS, but you have to wait too long to see a comic character. This shows the opposite. Lol. Where's the middle ground!
WYLEEJAY
WYLEEJAY - 9/27/2014, 2:39 PM
@Hulksta. Im sure Gordon will at one point find out shes a witness, and thats the plotline to keep her relevant on this show. Their gonna give us bits and pieces of Bruce and Selina growing up, but it would make more sense if they follow this show with a Batman show later on.
MightyZeus
MightyZeus - 9/27/2014, 8:48 PM
I'm not interested in Gotham. I just found the pilot to be a waste of time and it was to be expected because i think it could have been better to base a show on a vigilante in Gotham.
wise1too
wise1too - 9/28/2014, 7:37 AM
So wrong on almost every level
RealDCGuy
RealDCGuy - 9/28/2014, 8:40 PM
Agree with pretty much everything. Though the cinematography was bad at time ( Especially that terrible go-pro scene) The Establishing shots of the City were very nice and cinematic. Also not a fan of the inclusion of Renee Montoya and Crispus Allen, nor of the implied relationship between Montoya and Barbara Sr.

I'd give it a few more episodes before making a conclusive decision.
ThunderKat
ThunderKat - 10/2/2014, 11:31 AM
Alfred has that accident due to Michael Caine's popular portrayal.

It's way too early to judge a show by one episode. Give it six to eight episodes.

Remember we thought "Heroes" was great... through saving the cheerleader.
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