Walter Kovac's Prison Journal PART 1

Walter Kovac's Prison Journal PART 1

Walter Joseph Kovacs, better known to the world as the masked crime fighter Rorschach, was incarcerated in the New York State Penitentiary for 9 days. He escaped on the 10th. Underneath the mangled corpses and shattered porcelain, lay one blood stained journal practically unused save 5 deranged entries. This is Entry #1.

By HINKLEY - May 20, 2009 09:05 PM EST
Filed Under: Watchmen
Source: HINKLEY Fan Fic

From the Journal of Walter Joseph Kovacs
October 25th, 1985

Shackled with the pedophiles and junkies. The smell of depravity taints every painful breath till there’s no room for sanity. A cool sting of self-loathing permeates empty spaces and cuts down unknowingly atop the heads of rapists and thieves alike. No room for clean structure, organized chaos rules this forsaken den of human decay. Feces and vomit abound, these mongrels abandoned any notion of tangible salvation long ago in favor of one quick, mean jerk of the noose. Cowards in they’re most distilled form, they crawl on hand and knee like vermin before the axe falls, knowing no other way but to roll around in they’re own diseased filth until it consumes them from the outside in.

Nesting in the center of this waste, the wheezing and out of shape hypocrites in tiny blue hats. Catalysts, nestled cozy between the false bosom of superiority and perversion, they are no better than the criminals they oversee. Commissioned by the zoo then bribed by the animals, they’re paid twice to do nothing. A turn of the head, eyes blank from meaning or thought. Only thing that separates them from the caged is a uniform. Only thing saving them from the cage is a badge.

Waist deep in irony, wading through the sewage while the muck is rising. Every second is a reason and its become clear. I don’t belong here. This grim population would see me dead within the hour. Much to the chagrin of the writhing maggots infesting this glorified carcass, I will walk out by months end.

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TheMyth
TheMyth - 5/21/2009, 1:47 AM
Dude... you've been in general population for a time haven't you. It's your description of the C.O.'s that give it away to me. I've been there too...

Your vocabulary is astounding. I see you try to never use the same word twice, if it's avoidable, which can get challenging but makes for a much more riveting read. Kudos! Give us more!

"Commissioned by the zoo then bribed by the animals, they’re paid twice to do nothing." Best [frick]ing line and brilliant, dead-on analogy.
fadawn
fadawn - 5/21/2009, 3:33 PM
Realy liked that. Keep it coming!
TheMyth
TheMyth - 5/22/2009, 2:13 PM
HINKLEY: Keep them coming! We certainly could use some more tasteful contributors, as it seems a great many trolls have found their way to the site in the past few months. Check out some of the stuff by THEHAWK, Shaman, and a few others. You'll find there are wuite a few people with talent on this site.

BTW, I hope you've finally gotten over that crush on Jodie Foster ;P
THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 5/22/2009, 8:32 PM
NIce job man, I was quite enthralled by your descriptive language, and imagery. I look forward to more.

I myself spent some time in prison, not a pretty place, not at all. Saw some horrible things, a lot of which didn't get reported. I've seen men stabbed, choked beat, raped, all while the corrupt guards watched. Our judicial system is as corrupt as the streets from which those men were pulled

I think your story is worthy of the front page, they will occasionally post a fan fic or casting on the front, I myself have had one up on the front, my Batman villain casting.

@Myth, thanks for the mention man, but hey lets give credit where credit is due, you are a great writer as well.

Here are some links to other writers sites

Souleater
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/SurfersSanctum/

Shaman
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/AnnwnShamansLair/

Myth
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/TheMyth7/

THEHAWK(thats me)
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/ChroniclesofMoeniaArcis/

THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 5/22/2009, 8:34 PM
"Only thing that separates them from the caged is a uniform. Only thing saving them from the cage is a badge."

Awesome line.
TheMyth
TheMyth - 5/24/2009, 9:57 PM
You have to reach a certain level of comments before it hits front page.

THEHAWK: Thank you, didn't wanna blow my own horn ;) I've done time in county lockup, and I'm not talkin over-nighters here. Your right though, even in county, some crazy and sick shit can go on. As far as corrupt guards, how you think all those drugs find there way into the cellblock. Well, I know YOU know. The state of KY doesn't like people who smoke left-handed lucky's ;P At least your state isn't a communist wealth, I mean Common wealth.
InstigatorGIRL
InstigatorGIRL - 6/1/2009, 10:25 PM
Agreed Hawk. Very well done Hinkley!
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