The Amazing Spider-Man script (my version) please read

Okay guys, here it is.

Peter should look like he's a late 15 year old here. And of course look at least look some like the Peter in the comics (you know hazel eyes brown hair) and he should be about 5'7"5'9" because he only grew to 5'10" in the comics and he was older then.

Credits
Says it's name The Amazing Spider-man: The Beginning. A nerdy looking Peter Parker in Conner's Lab getting bitten by a Spider. Next video he starts climbing the walls in an ally finding his powers (several shots looking like the comic art frames). Next him building his costume and web-shooters and looking at a paper that says $1,000 reward for being able to defeat Crusher. Uncle Ben and Pete are in the car next and I'd like Uncle Ben to say during the credits, "With great power comes great responsibility" and have like words come out of and around the frame kinda like echoing him. (thought that would be kinda cool effect) Then have Spider-man defeat Crusher easily, not get paid and let the crook go. Find Uncle Ben shot and watch him die then go after his killer. He finds him and realizes that he was the same crook he let walk by him. (Pete's masked being Spider-man, makes more since else wise the guy at the fighting ring would know who Spider-man was.) Anyway the crook falls out the window but Spider-man saves him. And after words echoes what what his Uncle had said, "With great power comes great responsibility." Spider-man fights crime now, (a few clips of Spider-man vs crooks) and ending finally Pete at Uncle Ben's grave, and the spit face of Spider-man and Peter.
End credits.

The credits picture of split face of Spider-man and Peter transitions into the scene. With Pete staring at his Spider-man mask in full Spidey suit.

Scene: Peter's Room

Peter/Spider-man (thinking)
"Why? Why? Why did I have to let the crook go? Poor Uncle Ben." (he looks at a picture of Uncle Ben Aunt May and him self) "Well, maybe my vow never to look away from another crime will make up for what I've done. But Spring break is over and Uncle Ben is dead, and Peter Parker goes behind a mask."

Aunt May (knocking on Pete's door)
"Peter you must hurry to get ready for school."

Peter/Spider-man
"Be right there Aunt May."

Peter goes down stairs over their small house and picks up some letters on a side table.

Peter/Spider-man (thinking)
"Bills, bills, bills all way over do. I've got to do earn some money some how. But how?"

Aunt May (coming into the room from the kitchen)
"Oh there you are here's your lunch," (pretending to be happy as if nothing has happened) "and run off to school."

Peter/Spider-man
"I'm worried about you are you alright?"

Aunt May (pretending to be happy)
"Of course I'm alright go and have a good day at school."

Scene: Spidey swinging though jungle of NY

Spiderman/Peter (thinking)
"Okay, so I've got to go to figure out some kind of part time job to get some money, but what job... is the question."

Hears a robbery alarm.

"Well, here we go again... so much for being early for school."

Herman Schultz (carrying a big bag of stolen jewelry)
"Come on Aleksei! Before he catch us again!"

Aleksei Sytsevich
"I'm coming! And he won't catch us the big man planned this robbery too well."

Spider-man/Peter
"Aren't you being just a little too sure of the big man Sytsevich?"

Aleksei Sytsevich
"No, no not again!"

"Yep, it's me your friendly neighborhood Spider-man."

Swingings down webbing them up in different fashions.

Spider-man/Peter
"Well, boys that's a wrap sorry couldn't stay longer catch you later!"

Swings off.


Now I'm sorry but I have to go. I'll write part 2 soon hopefully. I know it was short but how do you guys like it so far? Oh and please read all the other parts when I write them. Thanks!