Early Akira Script Draft Details Leak

Early Akira Script Draft Details Leak

io9 have a fairly detailed run down of the early part of the script fopr the live action remake of Akira. But bare in mind, this is a draft that came about before Harry Potter scribe Steve Kloves was brought in for re-writes..

By MarkCassidy - Feb 28, 2011 01:02 PM EST
Filed Under: Anime & Manga
Source: io9.com

Apparently the following details come from casting pages that were sent out to agencies. It looks like they are pages from the latest draft of the screenplay, but of course there is no guarantee that all or any of these plot details will be used once the final draft is complete. io9 have provided a great, detailed rundown of how they feel the story is shaping up in comparison to both the original Manga and the Anime. It's so good I'm not even going to attempt to edit or paraphrase! Here it is in full..



To begin with, the movie is set in Neo-Manhattan instead of Neo-Tokyo, which makes sense. What's cool is that our main characters' names are not changed - they are still Kaneda, gang leader with a heart of gold, and Tetsuo, neurotic and superpowered. In the American film, Kaneda and Tetsuo are brothers, whereas in the original story they are just childhood friends with an intense bond. This is a fairly significant change, because now the two are bound by blood — which raises the inevitable question about why Tetsuo has superpowers and Kaneda doesn't. If they are just close friends, that's not a plothole.

We read bits of two scenes: One from early in the film, when Kaneda first meets his love interest, the anti-government revolutionary Ky (Kei in the original), in jail; and one from the end, during Tetsuo's rampage and confrontation with Kaneda.

Ky and Kaneda meet in jail

He and Tetsuo have just encountered one of the psychic Espers kids - Takashi in the original, renamed Tobias here. This scene squashes together several different scenes from the original movie, as Ky clumsily infodumps about how Akira and Tobias were experimented on by the government and given psychic abilities. A lot is made of how nobody believes that Akira exists, with Kaneda scoffing:

Honey, we're both behind bars. And while you're a real treat to look at, I've got a 'no crazy girl' policy. So good luck with your quest. I'm sure you'll find Akira hiding out with the Easter Bunny and Santa someplace.

This is a far cry from what you see in the original flick, where Kei is introduced as a mysterious revolutionary who doesn't trust Kaneda, and Kaneda's attempts to flirt with her are limited to asking if she wants to get a drink.

In the original, Kanada is left in the dust when Kei disappears. In the American version, he leaves Ky behind, calling after him that the government "wants something" from his brother Tetsuo, and she needs to talk more to him about it. I got the distinct sense that this Ky was going to be kind of spineless and trembly-lipped - more of a conspiracy theorist than a pistol-packing revolutionary. And somebody is trying to beef up Kaneda's wisecrackery as well. Not a great plan.

Superpowered Tetsuo confronts Kaneda

One thing that's interesting about the other scene we read is that it appears the American version of the film will include a lot of stuff about drugs that got left out of the Japanese film. In fact, there's a long-running joke (or maybe wry observation) among Akira enthusiasts that one of the problems with the movie is we see that Kaneda's gang all have drug capsules on their jackets but we never know why. In the manga, however, we learn that the gang is actually called the Capsules, and the drug trade is a big part of their story. As Tetsuo grows more and more powerful, he starts snarfing a ton of illegal drugs to keep his headaches and pain in check.

And we got a glimpse of a scene of his rampant drug abuse from the American script - a scene that really doesn't exist in the Japanese film. Kaneda and Ky confront Tetsuo at a bowling alley of all places, where he's murdered a rival gang member gruesomely, and is chowing down on pills. The scene is a bad mashup of a bit in the original movie when Tetsuo confronts two members of his gang who once picked on him in a pool hall, and the intense final fight between Tetsuo and Kaneda after Tetsuo has discovered the jars that hold Akira's remains.

There's a long, awful argument between Tetsuo and Kaneda, where Tetsuo tells his brother that he doesn't need him and Kaneda whines that he's spent his whole life "cleaning up after" Tetsuo and basically being his mommy. In the original story, it's true that Tetsuo is angrily jealous of Kaneda for being so awesome - but their fight is more like rivalry to control the gang. He also genuinely loves Kaneda and trusts him completely. This scene, with its weird bowling alley setting, makes their relationship feel like something out of a sitcom rather than a gang epic. I mean, at one point Tetsuo levitates some bowling balls and shoots them at Kaneda. Really, people? So you turned the space laser fight with Akira's organs into a bowling ball brawl? Not good!

Drugs and Jesus

I did like that we got to see how drugs are a big part of Tetsuo's disintegration. That's something that's barely touched upon in the Japanese film, but is a big part of the manga. Given that Akira and the Espers kids were created with weird government drugs, and that Kaneda's gang is named for drugs, it's pretty obvious that drug abuse should be a big subtheme in the film. And the drugs are going to be weird, futuristic stuff - so I hope we get to see more of that in the American film, and basically have the whole drug aspect of the gangland rivalries played up.

Still, I could do without lines like this, from Tetsuo:

Akira. I hear his voice. I am his savior. His resurrector. His breath of life. I'm going to find him. Set him free. Help him break it all apart again.

Of course the original movie is mystical, but it's also very much science fiction. It's possible that Tetsuo sees Akira as a possible messiah, but mostly he just wants to figure out what the hell is happening to him. Tetsuo knows the weird transformations in his body are connected to what happened to Akira, and he wants answers. Plus, Akira isn't some futuristic Jesus to be resurrected. All we know is that he's channeling "ultimate energy" - the force in all living things and ideas. His powers, though godlike, are not from God, if you get what I mean. They come from the universe.


Well, I'm a bit speechless. IF this remains the overall plot of the movie then that might be bearable but if that dialog remains intact then we have a problem. Also, what the [frick] is with this making main characters brothers thing that we are seeing seeping into Hollywood? First Wolverine and Sabertooth, now Tetsuo and Kaneda? Maybe they feel it makes their connection deeper, and thus is easier to convey to an audience. And maybe they are a lazy bunch of hacks that should rely on good story telling to do that job. There are some things I like here too though. As io9 point out, a lot of elements are actually more faithful to the original Manga than the animated film was.

Anyway, what is your take on this?

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tazmaniak
tazmaniak - 2/28/2011, 2:04 PM
"which raises the inevitable question about why Tetsuo has superpowers and Kaneda doesn't. If they are just close friends, that's not a plothole."

If one sibling has powers, why would it be a plothole if the other didn't?Plenty of characters are born with or develop abilities while their siblings don't.

"His powers, though godlike, are not from God, if you get what I mean. They come from the universe."

Well, depending on what you believe, God is the universe.It's the same thing.
jazzman
jazzman - 2/28/2011, 2:21 PM
dont like this script at all. Tetsuo and Kaneda are brothers who are Americans and they come from Neo-Manhattan. how thats faithful to the Manga.

they really need to leave Akira allow. WB should focus on making their DC films good who are not Batman and Superman.
Lert
Lert - 2/28/2011, 2:25 PM
Yawn!... trailers of movies we are actually intrested in please
Illuminatus
Illuminatus - 2/28/2011, 2:26 PM
Why is Hollywood making a live action Akira movie. This movie will require a big budget. Judging by what I just read, it will be a heavy R. So......wheres the logic? I seriously doubt this movie is getting made. The attached directors hardly have any experience with something on such a big scale. Also, there is a reason that it was successful as a magna and anime, because its nearly [frick]ing impossible to translate those things onto the silver screen in live action. Consider this movie "[frick]ed".
jazzman
jazzman - 2/28/2011, 2:29 PM
ComradeGrey
ComradeGrey - 2/28/2011, 2:29 PM
This rundown seems pretty harshly biased with very little evidence behind it's negation of the American stuff.
sweetre15
sweetre15 - 2/28/2011, 2:29 PM
I bet this is the draft from the Jonah Hex writer Albert Torres...should have known better than to hire him lol.
jazzman
jazzman - 2/28/2011, 2:34 PM
@Sweetre15

the Jonah Hex writters was Mark Neveldine and Brian Taylor
imnotwearinghockeypants
imnotwearinghockeypants - 2/28/2011, 2:45 PM
Just leave it alone.
marvel72
marvel72 - 2/28/2011, 3:14 PM
i got to neo-manhattan & had to stop reading,another insult to the fans & the source material yet again.
Superzero
Superzero - 2/28/2011, 3:24 PM
ummmm..."Dialog" bothers you hmm? Maybe you should learn how to spell before you chastise a professional writer about DIALOGUE.
MarkCassidy
MarkCassidy - 2/28/2011, 3:31 PM
World English Dictionary
dialogue or dialog (ˈdaɪəˌlɒɡ)

— n
1. conversation between two or more people
2. an exchange of opinions on a particular subject; discussion
3. the lines spoken by characters in drama or fiction
4. a particular passage of conversation in a literary or dramatic work
5. a literary composition in the form of a dialogue
6. a political discussion between representatives of two nations or groups

C*nt.
MightyDiamond
MightyDiamond - 2/28/2011, 3:34 PM
The script is good. I have the latest draft (not the Kloves one... but that is not handed in yet). A Lot of stuff is updated and has a core message.... Its a good read and with a true visual film maker behind the lens will be a fun ride. It holds no punches and is a LOT better than you will think. I have faith in this, it will be good.
thebamf
thebamf - 2/28/2011, 3:46 PM
hahahhaha!!!!!! C U Next Tuesday.
tehdude
tehdude - 2/28/2011, 3:50 PM
(my first post!)

@ToughGrappler if we were to go by your logic then hollywood shouldve stopped making comic book movies after they made batman and robin. By no means am i saying the live action akira film is gonna be good, just lets not be so quick to shoot the project down.
DukeAcureds
DukeAcureds - 2/28/2011, 3:57 PM
Are they still planning on calling the rival gang "Pakkis"? Because I think that should be the first thing to go, in the rewrites. Have the rival gang be the Clowns and not racist insults.
Please fix this film. Trilogy. TRILOGY. TRILOGY!!!
MightyDiamond
MightyDiamond - 2/28/2011, 4:17 PM
The main problem with people doing 'news' on sides is mainly EVERYTHING is taking out of context. You take 8-9 pages of a screenplay, normally from very different points in a story and you judge the WHOLE movie based upon that. (not CBM, but this article in particular)

Imagine, if you will, Batman talking about dogs and the fact he needs a new suit to combat them. Taking out of context people would be wtf!!! But when viewed in the whole screenplay you can see the running motif that its plays which builds to the crescendo in the finale with the villain. Here you take ONE line of dialouge from ONE scene and ONE line of dialouge from ONE other scene; it's unfair on the production if Im honest.

This movie will be different to the manga... like the anime was different to that... its called adaptation. You make it relevant to the story you, as a film maker want to tell.

This script has a take on the material that incorperates what has come before and adds... making the movie commerically accessible to a mass audiance.

It has flaws, it has bad lines and it even has some REALLY bad typos... but heck, that' what making a movie i all about, hammering it till its as perfect as can be upon release; a task that is done by EVERY member of the production.

Rant. Over. Out.
tehdude
tehdude - 2/28/2011, 4:22 PM
@MightyDiamond

Your ideas intrigue me and I wish to subscribe to your newsletter.
AlexDeLarge87
AlexDeLarge87 - 2/28/2011, 5:06 PM
Make the movie with japanese actors and give justice to the manga or dont bother!
Jer3miah
Jer3miah - 2/28/2011, 5:49 PM
Why was the name "Jesus" put in that article? Makes no sense..
crazyray
crazyray - 2/28/2011, 6:17 PM
Kei as some limp wristed believer knockoff? FAIL #1. Fight in a bowling alley vs. (aptly put)"space laser fight with Akira's organ"!?!?!? F@CKING FAIL #2. The introduction of the Christ-like Messiah angle because its a "Western" interpretation of the original manga??!?!?!?!?!? PUNCH SELF IN THE FACE FAIL #3. Seriously, Im Catholic. I would appreciate the originality of seeing an eastern influence properly, respectfully, maturely, and originally portrayed on- screen just for once.

The fact that they could pull off the drug connection and tie that into Tetsuo's breakdown and disintegration... awesome. I could see it working.

The brother angle makes their relationship and bond feel cheaper and appear as just an emotional device or plot point as opposed to having real meaning and depth. Yeah... they REALLY starting to piss me off with this. Four steps back, one step forward. Sh!T
ShaunHimself
ShaunHimself - 2/28/2011, 6:37 PM
"To begin with, the movie is set in Neo-Manhattan instead of Neo-Tokyo, which makes sense"
Why does that make sense? O_o
cole33
cole33 - 2/28/2011, 6:38 PM
Making them brothers KILLS their connection! the whole point is that their bond is DEEPER THEN BLOOD. It's one of the base themes that connection to something beyond what you're born to.

They need someone that can do SMART sci-fci for this.

Tetsuo isn't trying to release a messiah! Thats completely changed! it's eastern philosophy! it's about KNOWLEDGE, finding out what Akira is facing the ultimately knowledge of what man can become, A GOD.
cole33
cole33 - 2/28/2011, 6:42 PM
Someone like C Nolan, maybe, Snyder. And Tetsuo going up to low orbit and destroying the laser satelitte is a must.


This better be one full film that only documents The Capsules and teh world around them.

I don't know, AKIRA is so be on so many levels, THEME, SCI FCI, EPICNESS, CHARACTER DEPTH, CHARACTER CONNECTIONS, EXISTENTIALISM. I just don't know if it can be done.
NightBoyWonder
NightBoyWonder - 2/28/2011, 7:21 PM
Well hopefully after Man of Steel Snyder will see the script, use it as toilet paper, go into his movie collection and start taking notes on Akira.
Flaco04
Flaco04 - 2/28/2011, 9:37 PM
Lame
HavocT
HavocT - 2/28/2011, 11:23 PM
And they wonder why some of the comic and videogame movies don't work...

Why his brother? What was the point of that? I could handle it if it weren't Neo-Tokyo and if they were American... but at that point you have to stop. The connection between the characters changes too much this way.
McFly13
McFly13 - 3/1/2011, 6:42 AM
Why can't Hollywood just do this movie like they did the Watchmen? You dont have to write a script, just use the Manga!
VictorHugo
VictorHugo - 3/1/2011, 9:55 AM
This is the wrongest, dumbest, greediest and retardest heresy ever to be commited to the comicbookmovie-dom.

This stupid, insulting and heretic idea must be terminated before it spreads.
derekserbia
derekserbia - 3/1/2011, 4:17 PM
on the Watchmen comment - from a reliable inside source: The people who did Watchmen are doing Akira, and I'm talking studio. Watchmen cost a reported $150mil and made an estimated $185mil, just above a failure/bust, and they kept the graphic nature of violence resulting in the R rating. Akira, to be done in two films, is slated to be pg-13 in order to draw a bigger audience, they hope and prey, which means they have to water down some of the more intense scenes. They are reportedly pulling the storyline from a combo of the manga and movie. To be honest though this production is in HUGE doubt. By the end of either this week or next this project could be very well done. This project was slated to be done in NY, which is now mostly likely out, and if they don't decide to do this in L.A., we can put this to bed.
derekserbia
derekserbia - 3/1/2011, 4:31 PM
Jeez - if a potential Akira live movie makes all of you so upset, what if i told you that Leo Dicaprio also has the movie rights to Ninja Scroll.
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